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  • Life - Mechazawa

    5 38.46%
  • Life! the battle - HolderOfTheDarkChalice

    8 61.54%
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    Battle - Life

    And here it is...our first AO poetry battle! Mechazawa and HolderOfTheDarkChalice, competing for dominance of the poetry forum!

    Topic: Life (The good, bad, or ugly)
    Style: Freestyle (whatever floats your boat)


    Life - Mechazawa

    Life
    Victory. Defeat
    Attack, retreat, confront
    (Put up/shut up) (It’s yours win/lose) (Fight tooth and nail)
    Battle
    vs.


    Life! the battle - HolderOfTheDarkChalice

    Things always seem dark , bleak and
    uncaring , never ending darkness is
    what this life of mine still brings.

    Loving life to the fullest ,seeing rainbows
    as the birds fly over head , and the wind blows
    across a warm cheek being kissed , life can be so
    thoughtful yet so regrettable.

    Holding the one you love , letting go of the one you
    need things no matter the time or place life seems to
    beg for more and give much less , with no regrets i smile as i let life take what road it may.

    Nomore worriying on what is or what could be
    because life is to short and disheartning to
    try and fight things that must be so tkae life
    like you would something new and enjoy it.
    Who will be the champion? Cast your votes, AO! And though not required, it would be nice of you to provide feedback to the challengers when you vote.
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    Re: Battle - Life

    I liked both of them... and i couldn't choose.. >< so I went with the one that kinda made me smile. Both of them are really good. ^-^ Keep it up guys.

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    Smile Re: Battle - Life

    Yeah,

    I also voted for whatever that made me smile, Although both were very good and both were different in their own way,

    I loved how.....

    ~Mechazawa's poem was very short and very quick to read, and was straight to the point. Well done!

    ~HolderOfTheDarkChalice's poem, I loved the description, that's the main thing I love about poems. Awesome job!

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    Re: Battle - Life

    Come on folks get out and vote. We have forty something views, but only three votes. If the poems are that bad that they aren't worth a vote, post and say why.

    On a side note, Holder yours is so much bigger than mine in comparison. I think I'm suffering a little from poem envy.

    On a true side note, I think its kinda funny we both went for the use of battle. Are you reading my mind right now? O__o
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    Re: Battle - Life

    "Loving life to the fullest ,seeing rainbows
    as the birds fly over head , and the wind blows
    across a warm cheek being kissed , life can be so
    thoughtful yet so regrettable."

    Love the description Holder ^^ so imma vote for ya...

    And heads up man~!!

    "Nomore worriying on what is or what could be"

    thats a wrong spelling there right? i think its... Worrying but im not sure... someone help~!!! Tenchu san?

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    Re: Battle - Life

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post

    thats a wrong spelling there right? i think its... Worrying but im not sure... someone help~!!! Tenchu san?
    Never fear, Tenchu-sensei is here. "Worrying" is a word and it was used correctly. (Nomore, on the other hand, is two words. "No more")

    Well done to both contestants, I must say. It's a really tight battle!

    I voted for Mechazawa, though. The length may have been shorter, but the theme of duality and choosing the kind of life you live was a very well-expressed theme.


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    Re: Battle - Life

    WOOT! We have five votes for the first poetry battle. Lets try to get five more now, come on folks just select the one you like the most and hit the vote button.

    Everyone has 5-6 more days to vote, so I would like to see 20 votes. That probably won't happen, so at least show the first battle some love with 10 votes.
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    Re: Battle - Life

    I voted for Mechazawa.

    I did like both, but I felt Mecha had.. I don't know a beating crescendo to it. It felt like it built momentum with each word. Pulsing to it's battle cry.

    Some of the best poems are short. Yours was very nice. Good work, and good luck.

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