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Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Texas,USA
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![]() ![]() Credits: 160 | Battle magic Sorcerers and shamans, weave your spells of war, Ensure our mighty sword-arms are the strongest and the quickest. Entwine us with great battle magic 'til we stand knee-deep in gore, And by all the gods, we'll ride to where the fray rages the thickest!
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,380 | Re: Battle magic I really liked the idea behind this poem. Short but filled with imagery. I think the wording could be worked on.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 309 | Re: Battle magic not evryone has perfect grammar ye know? but still it has long lines that makes the poem like with 8 lines if u divide em... its really nice.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,380 | Re: Battle magic I never said anything about grammar, Ball. I meant wording. As in the way you word things. I know that english isnt your first language. Hell, I'm even learning spanish myself! Estoy practicando mi espanol!
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