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Reply With QuoteI really liked the idea behind this poem. Short but filled with imagery. I think the wording could be worked on.
Sorcerers and shamans, weave your spells of war,
Ensure our mighty sword-arms are the strongest and the quickest.
Entwine us with great battle magic 'til we stand knee-deep in gore,
And by all the gods, we'll ride to where the fray rages the thickest!
Fr3aK~0f~N@Tu|23
I really liked the idea behind this poem. Short but filled with imagery. I think the wording could be worked on.
Seduced by Flesh
not evryone has perfect grammar ye know?
but still it has long lines that makes the poem like with 8 lines if u divide em...
its really nice.
perdoname michelle!
I never said anything about grammar, Ball. I meant wording. As in the way you word things. I know that english isnt your first language. Hell, I'm even learning spanish myself! Estoy practicando mi espanol!
Seduced by Flesh
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