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    A Battle of Words!

    Things are going fine living my life
    the way i want enjoying the life i
    made for me self , i love what i do
    and things are always changing ,replaying
    lover in my head.

    Making my life what is with how i
    always keeping it real not following
    the rules , making my own rules ,people
    see this and try to make a name for themselves
    with ideas they get from me.


    Being one of a kind isn't easy but its a way
    to live always redefining who you are , things
    are always changing , one minute your on top
    of your game , the next thing someone comes
    along and tries to improve on what you do then
    you fall behind.

    Sure life is harsh and full of imitators , players ,
    and wanna Be's , you have to always be on
    your toes to keep what you have never being
    able to sit back unless you want to loose what you have.

    So here i am putting a few words down making
    yet another poem using my own ideas and thoughts,
    never being played , tossed aside , or letting others
    take what i have and make it there own.

    Step up to the plate if you think you can
    put words in emotions . full of passion be
    it hatred ,anger , love its all the same so
    bring it i have all day to keep my words as
    real as yours.
    ___________________________________________

    this poem is difrent than most because i thought
    i would try a poem that chalanges others to do
    better though its my first i still think its something
    intresting.

    comments and sugestions are welcomed
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: A Battle of Words!

    hey love this poem as its true people do find it hard to be themselves (well some) and they copy of others and try to act like them, great poem



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    Re: A Battle of Words!

    Great poem cause it makes you think of how some people can try to say the right thing to make you feel better which sometimes it works,but most times it doesn't.
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