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    Re: The Battlefeild Of Men

    Um k..... i dont see why we have to rhyme repetitivly but.....yeah!

    What was this for? Give me something so i can adequitly criticize it.

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    Re: The Battlefeild Of Men

    HUH? i dont get what your tring to say....some lines ryhme, some don't. Its what i felt about was in a certain setting. I am proud of it!!!
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    Re: The Battlefeild Of Men

    Well it does sound cool with the battle and everything. Yeah sorry. I'm just not into rhyming. But i do think it sounds appealing. Lots of people will enjoy reading it on AO!!!!!!!!!!

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    Thank you Nympho for your honest comment on my work. This will encourage me to write more poems for the AO community. Thank you.
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    Re: The Battlefeild Of Men

    Maybe I was destined to read this poem... It was so clear and so good in combining those words that I read before... A very great job for you who made that...

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