Not bad...To me it sounds more like a war game introduction lol
What beautiful destruction
Waves of madness flow,
Brushing a quiet shore
What it suggests is heresy
Filling those blessed with grief
But it knawes on my fingers,
Day and night
And I must find relief
The silent man of the boat
Hands me a weapon of siege
“make me a wrecked paradise”
He whispers in my ear,
And it starts to bleed
I start silently my task,
Wiping the land clear of flesh,
And all that use to be.
Awe flows from eyes undead,
Filling the ashen seas.
But disgust consumes their hearts,
Filling an empty hell
For hell has risen,
To create such beautiful destruction for me.
Well, I was bored so I'd thought I'd take a stab at making one of these.
Death is your most loyal companion, for he will never fail you.
Not bad...To me it sounds more like a war game introduction lol
*Corrected the spelling of the title*
well...that was pretty good for a first timer...the title was especially good..."beautiful destruction"..to me, it sounds like a very interesting oxymoron...![]()
Awesome dude, that was a pretty kool poem. Keep it up, i hope to see more of your poems later in the future.
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