Beautiful destruction.

Exoparadapsyphobia · Dec 21, 2006, 09:52 PM

What beautiful destruction

Waves of madness flow,
Brushing a quiet shore
What it suggests is heresy
Filling those blessed with grief
But it knawes on my fingers,
Day and night
And I must find relief

The silent man of the boat
Hands me a weapon of siege
“make me a wrecked paradise”
He whispers in my ear,
And it starts to bleed

I start silently my task,
Wiping the land clear of flesh,
And all that use to be.

Awe flows from eyes undead,
Filling the ashen seas.
But disgust consumes their hearts,
Filling an empty hell
For hell has risen,
To create such beautiful destruction for me.

Well, I was bored so I'd thought I'd take a stab at making one of these.

wishper · Dec 22, 2006, 01:53 AM

Not bad...To me it sounds more like a war game introduction lol

Hassun · Dec 22, 2006, 03:25 AM

*Corrected the spelling of the title*

*Tano-kun* · Dec 22, 2006, 06:17 PM

well...that was pretty good for a first timer...the title was especially good..."beautiful destruction"..to me, it sounds like a very interesting oxymoron...

*ketaro* · Dec 25, 2006, 07:57 AM

Awesome dude, that was a pretty kool poem. Keep it up, i hope to see more of your poems later in the future.

StarryDreamer001 · Dec 27, 2006, 07:07 PM

I liked it a whole lot =D Extremely interesting and it flows really well XD nice job!

Dec 21, 2006, 09:52 PM	#1 (permalink)
Exoparadapsyphobia Sophist of Satire Join Date: May 2006 Location: Always where I'm not supposed to be. Posts: 530 Thanks: 1 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 5,533	Beautiful destruction. What beautiful destruction Waves of madness flow, Brushing a quiet shore What it suggests is heresy Filling those blessed with grief But it knawes on my fingers, Day and night And I must find relief The silent man of the boat Hands me a weapon of siege “make me a wrecked paradise” He whispers in my ear, And it starts to bleed I start silently my task, Wiping the land clear of flesh, And all that use to be. Awe flows from eyes undead, Filling the ashen seas. But disgust consumes their hearts, Filling an empty hell For hell has risen, To create such beautiful destruction for me. Well, I was bored so I'd thought I'd take a stab at making one of these. __________________
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