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    Beautiful destruction.

    What beautiful destruction

    Waves of madness flow,
    Brushing a quiet shore
    What it suggests is heresy
    Filling those blessed with grief
    But it knawes on my fingers,
    Day and night
    And I must find relief

    The silent man of the boat
    Hands me a weapon of siege
    “make me a wrecked paradise”
    He whispers in my ear,
    And it starts to bleed

    I start silently my task,
    Wiping the land clear of flesh,
    And all that use to be.

    Awe flows from eyes undead,
    Filling the ashen seas.
    But disgust consumes their hearts,
    Filling an empty hell
    For hell has risen,
    To create such beautiful destruction for me.

    Well, I was bored so I'd thought I'd take a stab at making one of these.
    Death is your most loyal companion, for he will never fail you.

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    Re: Beuatiful destruction.

    Not bad...To me it sounds more like a war game introduction lol

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    Re: Beautiful destruction.

    *Corrected the spelling of the title*

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    Cool Re: Beautiful destruction.

    well...that was pretty good for a first timer...the title was especially good..."beautiful destruction"..to me, it sounds like a very interesting oxymoron...

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    Re: Beautiful destruction.

    Awesome dude, that was a pretty kool poem. Keep it up, i hope to see more of your poems later in the future.

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    Re: Beautiful destruction.

    I liked it a whole lot =D Extremely interesting and it flows really well XD nice job!
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