Exoparadapsyphobia

What beautiful destruction

Waves of madness flow,
Brushing a quiet shore
What it suggests is heresy
Filling those blessed with grief
But it knawes on my fingers,
Day and night
And I must find relief

The silent man of the boat
Hands me a weapon of siege
“make me a wrecked paradise”
He whispers in my ear,
And it starts to bleed

I start silently my task,
Wiping the land clear of flesh,
And all that use to be.

Awe flows from eyes undead,
Filling the ashen seas.
But disgust consumes their hearts,
Filling an empty hell
For hell has risen,
To create such beautiful destruction for me.

Well, I was bored so I'd thought I'd take a stab at making one of these.

__________________
Death is your most loyal companion, for he will never fail you.

wishper

Not bad...To me it sounds more like a war game introduction lol

__________________

Hassun

*Corrected the spelling of the title*

__________________

Tano-kun

well...that was pretty good for a first timer...the title was especially good..."beautiful destruction"..to me, it sounds like a very interesting oxymoron...

ketaro

Awesome dude, that was a pretty kool poem. Keep it up, i hope to see more of your poems later in the future.

__________________
O o
/¯/___________________________  ________
IM'MA FIRIN' MAH LAZERZ! IBLAAAAAAA!
\_\¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯¯ ¯ ¯¯¯¯¯¯¯

StarryDreamer001

I liked it a whole lot =D Extremely interesting and it flows really well XD nice job!

__________________
I tear my heart open...just to feel...

<---hieifan123