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    Beautiful dreamer ( my freind Oni made this not me )

    Beautiful dreamer, wake unto me,
    Starlight and dewdrops are waiting for thee;
    Sounds of the rude world heard in the day,
    Lull'd by the moonlight have all pass'd away!

    Beautiful dreamer, queen of my song,
    List while I woo thee with soft melody;
    Gone are the cares of life's busy throng.

    Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me!
    Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me!

    Beautiful dreamer, out on the sea,
    Mermaids are chaunting the wild lorelie;
    Over the streamlet vapors are borne,
    Waiting to fade at the bright coming morn.

    Beautiful dreamer, beam on my heart,
    E'en as the morn on the streamlet and sea;
    Then will all clouds of sorrow depart,

    Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me!

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    Re: Beautiful dreamer ( my freind Oni made this not me )

    Well your friend Oni is a gifted on writing poem. This poem seemed calm and smooth but there seems to be a dark side well through my eyes well. Thats my opinion of course. I would gladly hope to see more of yours or your friend's poems in the future!
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    Re: Beautiful dreamer ( my freind Oni made this not me )

    Quote Originally Posted by darkness of an angel View Post
    Beautiful dreamer, wake unto me,
    Starlight and dewdrops are waiting for thee;
    Sounds of the rude world heard in the day,
    Lull'd by the moonlight have all pass'd away!

    Beautiful dreamer, queen of my song,
    List while I woo thee with soft melody;
    Gone are the cares of life's busy throng.

    Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me!
    Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me!

    Beautiful dreamer, out on the sea,
    Mermaids are chaunting the wild lorelie;
    Over the streamlet vapors are borne,
    Waiting to fade at the bright coming morn.

    Beautiful dreamer, beam on my heart,
    E'en as the morn on the streamlet and sea;
    Then will all clouds of sorrow depart,

    Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me!

    I like this poem! It's smooth and it's like a song. Good work!

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    Re: Beautiful dreamer ( my freind Oni made this not me )

    Cute poem.^_^ Its a poem that u can sing and its kinda soothing. Your friend can write well.

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