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May 20, 2007, 10:56 AM
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 | Beautiful dreamer ( my freind Oni made this not me ) Beautiful dreamer, wake unto me, Starlight and dewdrops are waiting for thee; Sounds of the rude world heard in the day, Lull'd by the moonlight have all pass'd away! Beautiful dreamer, queen of my song, List while I woo thee with soft melody; Gone are the cares of life's busy throng. Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me! Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me! Beautiful dreamer, out on the sea, Mermaids are chaunting the wild lorelie; Over the streamlet vapors are borne, Waiting to fade at the bright coming morn. Beautiful dreamer, beam on my heart, E'en as the morn on the streamlet and sea; Then will all clouds of sorrow depart, Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me!
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May 20, 2007, 11:01 AM
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| ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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| Re: Beautiful dreamer ( my freind Oni made this not me ) Well your friend Oni is a gifted on writing poem. This poem seemed calm and smooth but there seems to be a dark side well through my eyes well. Thats my opinion of course. I would gladly hope to see more of yours or your friend's poems in the future! 
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May 20, 2007, 07:50 PM
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| Re: Beautiful dreamer ( my freind Oni made this not me ) Quote:
I like this poem! It's smooth and it's like a song. Good work! | |
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May 20, 2007, 08:33 PM
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| Re: Beautiful dreamer ( my freind Oni made this not me ) Cute poem.^_^ Its a poem that u can sing and its kinda soothing. Your friend can write well. |
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