Beautiful mix:
A really beautiful poem, very nice work with describing it all- I could see it all right before my eyes... very nice indeed...
And it should give hope to all the readers too- that they're not alone- that's what I thought especially here: "As I follow I see another star light up beside mine, then another and another."
I really like that line... Nice work!!!
In vain:
I like the way you've written it- it has rythme and... well it's cool! ^^
And the theme- I really seem to know how that feels- yes I do... it's really not a very nice feeling...
A really nice work with these two ^^ I really enjoyed reading them... And I'll be waiting forward for more...


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