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    A Beautiful Moment

    I stand out in the field,
    as the wind blows furiously across.
    The meadow is littered with beautiful,
    flowers of all colors.

    the flowers explode,
    bringing the mass,
    of flower petals all around me,
    blocking my view.

    i see a figure in the distance,
    and that of only a woman.
    this is all that is known,
    as my glare,
    through the multitude of petals,
    is so greatly obsured.

    a white dress...
    dark hair...
    nothing more can be seen,
    as she approaches me.

    a gentle breeze,
    is all that's left now.
    it causes the petals to rain down,
    as i finally can see her.

    the distance is now little,
    as a petal or two sits upon her head.
    I smile a bit,
    and brush them off her hair softly.

    she looks up,
    and watches the petals,
    fall from her head,
    with those beautiful blue eyes.

    she laughs aloud,
    and places a petal,
    back up on her head,
    with a huge smile,
    and a slight tilt of her head.

    i smile in return,
    knowing how cute she acts.
    i lean in with my fingers to her chin,
    and kiss her lips ever so softly.

    I look into her in the eyes,
    as she looks at me lovingly.
    Next thing I know,
    I'm watch her lean down,
    and rain on me with petal,
    with a flick.

    I smile at her playfulness,
    as she continues to do so.
    I guard a few more shots,
    before I smile and laugh outloud.

    I charge with a simple step,
    and softly bring her towards the ground.
    i make her land on me,
    before rolling her to the ground,
    laying her in the petals.

    i smile at her,
    as i happily lay to the side,
    laying in the rainbow petals,
    that have now scattered the ground.

    i look at her lovingly once more,
    and with a loving,
    slow,
    tender kiss...
    i sink into the abyss of love.


    By: White Rose

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: A Beautiful Moment

    Quote Originally Posted by Shade/K' Heart View Post
    I stand out in the field,
    as the wind blows furiously across.
    The meadow is littered with beautiful,
    flowers of all colors.

    the flowers explode,
    bringing the mass,
    of flower petals all around me,
    blocking my view.

    i see a figure in the distance,
    and that of only a woman.
    this is all that is known,
    as my glare,
    through the multitude of petals,
    is so greatly obsured.

    a white dress...
    dark hair...
    nothing more can be seen,
    as she approaches me.

    a gentle breeze,
    is all that's left now.
    it causes the petals to rain down,
    as i finally can see her.

    the distance is now little,
    as a petal or two sits upon her head.
    I smile a bit,
    and brush them off her hair softly.

    she looks up,
    and watches the petals,
    fall from her head,
    with those beautiful blue eyes.

    she laughs aloud,
    and places a petal,
    back up on her head,
    with a huge smile,
    and a slight tilt of her head.

    i smile in return,
    knowing how cute she acts.
    i lean in with my fingers to her chin,
    and kiss her lips ever so softly.

    I look into her in the eyes,
    as she looks at me lovingly.
    Next thing I know,
    I'm watch her lean down,
    and rain on me with petal,
    with a flick.

    I smile at her playfulness,
    as she continues to do so.
    I guard a few more shots,
    before I smile and laugh outloud.

    I charge with a simple step,
    and softly bring her towards the ground.
    i make her land on me,
    before rolling her to the ground,
    laying her in the petals.

    i smile at her,
    as i happily lay to the side,
    laying in the rainbow petals,
    that have now scattered the ground.

    i look at her lovingly once more,
    and with a loving,
    slow,
    tender kiss...
    i sink into the abyss of love.


    By: White Rose
    *claps* Really A Beautiful Moment and Beautiful Poem here ..
    I love read it ..It's very sweet and Nice ..Keep it up..

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    Re: A Beautiful Moment

    i agree with xxoxx...beautifully written... ^^ nice description...a very good poem indeed... nice~!

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