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    Beauty

    Beauty is more then appearance
    It's a feeling
    not a wish

    Beauty surrounds us all
    it just takes us to want to see it
    We can see the beauty in each person
    it's just it takes for someone to show

    Beauty is what I see when I look at you
    it's the thing that keeps me interested
    I can see your beauty not through my eyes
    but through what you say

    Beauty is you
    you are what I see
    in my eyes I see the most beautiful creation
    A woman with sense and love
    A woman all men would love to have

    All in all
    I just want to say have a beautiful day

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    Re: Beauty

    Man, that was... Beautiful!!

    Seriously though, you did a pretty damn good job with this one. I like how you speak of how beauty surrounds us, yet nobody really tries to look for it when it's under their noses. Then you go off to speak on how who you're involved with is your definition of beauty. Mad props, Pockets! ^_^

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    Re: Beauty

    Man sweet poem, if your new to this poem writing, please write more because we can always do with a good old poem Keep it up, can't wait for your others...

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    Re: Beauty

    Quote Originally Posted by Mini Dev View Post
    Man sweet poem, if your new to this poem writing, please write more because we can always do with a good old poem Keep it up, can't wait for your others...
    I agree with Mini Dev here. You only post your work at random times. I would--and I'm sure Mini Dev as well--would like to see more of your work. Keep it up man! You're doin' well!


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    Re: Beauty

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    I agree with Mini Dev here. You only post your work at random times. I would--and I'm sure Mini Dev as well--would like to see more of your work. Keep it up man! You're doin' well!
    Thank you guys, I will try and start posting more poems. Usually my best comes to me at random times though lol.

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