Beauty is more then appearance
It's a feeling
not a wish
Beauty surrounds us all
it just takes us to want to see it
We can see the beauty in each person
it's just it takes for someone to show
Beauty is what I see when I look at you
it's the thing that keeps me interested
I can see your beauty not through my eyes
but through what you say
Beauty is you
you are what I see
in my eyes I see the most beautiful creation
A woman with sense and love
A woman all men would love to have
All in all
I just want to say have a beautiful day
Man, that was... Beautiful!!
Seriously though, you did a pretty damn good job with this one. I like how you speak of how beauty surrounds us, yet nobody really tries to look for it when it's under their noses. Then you go off to speak on how who you're involved with is your definition of beauty. Mad props, Pockets! ^_^
Man sweet poem, if your new to this poem writing, please write more because we can always do with a good old poem
I agree with Mini Dev here. You only post your work at random times. I would--and I'm sure Mini Dev as well--would like to see more of your work. Keep it up man! You're doin' well!Originally Posted by Mini Dev
Man sweet poem, if your new to this poem writing, please write more because we can always do with a good old poem
Thank you guys, I will try and start posting more poems. Usually my best comes to me at random times though lol.I agree with Mini Dev here. You only post your work at random times. I would--and I'm sure Mini Dev as well--would like to see more of your work. Keep it up man! You're doin' well!
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