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    Beauty and Love

    Beauty is in the eye of the beholder,
    Then what I see is true beauty before me,
    It will last for an eternity in my eyes,
    As will the love I have for you.

    You are the vision of beauty,
    Such bright eyes, such a sweet smile,
    I tremble in your presence,
    For you are my Goddess,
    I would worship you all my life.

    Your kindness, your love,
    Is nothing I could have imagine,
    For I cheirsh till my death,
    Even in death, I would still love you.

    As you have given me life,
    I would gladly give mine to protect you,
    I will and always love you.

    enjoy and comment plz. thanks

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    Re: Beauty and Love

    ^_^ Jason this is a very nice poem. Keep up the good work! *huggles*

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    Re: Beauty and Love

    Hmm. I wasnt really into the wording, but it is a nice subject to write about.
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    Re: Beauty and Love

    Nice this is a really good poem, i didnt know you could write poems jason.

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    Re: Beauty and Love

    Nice poem, the first line really caught my attention, and I must say that wording of the this poem sort of confused me, but as I read deeper it became clearer to me! Keep up the good work!

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    Re: Beauty and Love

    heh heh ^^' well i gotta say tht i just needed to let out some feelings and stuff. I guess it doesnt make sense in some ways and I try to make it beautiful and stuff. Looks like it didnt go down to well

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    Re: Beauty and Love

    Aww...Jason-kun, I made sense out of it and I think it came out well. Like I said before, you are good at making your emotions into poems and making them have significance. Your poems are lovely ^_^. Ja ne, Abby-san.

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    Re: Beauty and Love

    nice poem
    "You are the vision of beauty,
    Such bright eyes, such a sweet smile,
    I tremble in your presence,
    For you are my Goddess,
    I would worship you all my life"
    this was my favorite part,
    i love how you put you emoutions in the poem
    Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon


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