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    Because I Care

    I want you to know that even though
    it may not seem like it, I care.

    Even though you think I'm not listening,
    I'm always right there; soakin' it in.

    Whenever you feel down, my heart follows suit.
    And when you're happy, I'm ecstatic.

    I wish nothing but the best for you every day.
    And as much as people tell me to stop, I can't
    just sit idle and not care about someone
    who's so close to my heart.

    When you need me, I'm always here.
    If you are struggling, I am right
    behind you, giving you my support.

    Please understand that sometimes, even
    if I don't show it, or if I only ask a
    question about info that is given to me;
    that does not mean I don't care.

    Only that my hands are full...

    My deepest and sincere apologies, love.
    For I have failed to show concern.

    Forgive me and know that even if you
    don't want me around, I'll remain right at your side.

    Because my love for you has never changed, and it never will...


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    Re: Because I Care

    aw... this is sweet ^^ nicely done... full of emotion.. i suggest u put some rhymes and methaphores..

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    Re: Because I Care

    I loved it!!!!!
    Love the way your express your thoughts!!!!
    Great job!!!
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    Re: Because I Care

    And you really care ...sweet poem ..
    I like read it ..How luckey this person to have some care a bout him /her..
    Really Nice work ...Keep it up...^^

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    Re: Because I Care

    Thanks to everyone who's commented thus far. I appreciate it greatly! ^_^

    This poem is kind of experimental, because I hardly write without rhyming. I'm suprised that this many people commented on it, to be quite honest. Thanks again.


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    Re: Because I Care

    awsome poem! i love it!

    And i love the ones that not rhyme also...^_^

    keep it up!

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    Re: Because I Care

    A W S O M E
    W M
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    E M O S W A

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    Re: Because I Care

    Quote Originally Posted by ihauntforlust View Post
    A W S O M E
    W M
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    OOOOOHHH! Double posting! That'll land you in some infractions/warnings. Careful how you post 'round here. ^_^

    Thanks for the comments though. I appreciate it. I'm glad you like my writing. I hope you like my other poems as well.


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