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    Re: Because of you

    the wording was really strong but near the middle i got sort of tired of it. Its a short poem so thats even worse. i like it its just that i lacks making me want to read it more. no hate man i'm worse than u

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    Re: Because of you

    Wow since I "Love" that song. I see where the poemsing coming from, but I like

    Tender tears of salty taste nursed me to the truth
    I like this one most. My favorite line that caught me eyes~

    Crafting upon my flesh the fruit of your passions
    xD I have no idea whatcha mean by that, but then again. I do.

    Its wasn't boring just somewhat different from your other work.
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