Becoming

Looking at this maze from the top
This feeling is never going to stop
Walking in circles lost
Getting to the center at any cost
This is an experiment
And I'm the peasant
The big picture is gone
Feeling so withdrawn
This is just the inside
Doesn't mean you have to abide
Forget the negative
Don't forget how to live
Now its all positive
And everything is active
Tune into your calling
You'll never be falling
The journey is long
Never forget to be strong.

it is a beautiful poem, shows of both sides. but yet are intertwined.
you are a great poet.

wow thats an inspiring poem. you should write more

Woa. Once again AWESOME!!! Ive noticed in all your poems, theres some darkness there, but theres always some good stuff in the end. Inspiring.