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    Becoming

    Looking at this maze from the top
    This feeling is never going to stop
    Walking in circles lost
    Getting to the center at any cost
    This is an experiment
    And I'm the peasant
    The big picture is gone
    Feeling so withdrawn
    This is just the inside
    Doesn't mean you have to abide
    Forget the negative
    Don't forget how to live
    Now its all positive
    And everything is active
    Tune into your calling
    You'll never be falling
    The journey is long
    Never forget to be strong.

    THE RULES!

    I'm on my grind in search to find whats on my mind, its one of a kind!

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    Re: Becoming

    it is a beautiful poem, shows of both sides. but yet are intertwined.
    you are a great poet.

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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    Re: Becoming

    wow thats an inspiring poem. you should write more
    Michi naru seki no yume kara mezamete

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    Re: Becoming

    Woa. Once again AWESOME!!! Ive noticed in all your poems, theres some darkness there, but theres always some good stuff in the end. Inspiring.

    Death is as generation is, a composition of like elements, and a decompostion into the same.

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