Thread: Bedtime

Eye-lids drooping,
Thoughts tumbling,
Like crumpled paper,
Littering the desktop

Sounds impposible but i can see it in my head @.@ vivid poem..with awesome description..

i made a poem about being sleepy like this.. but it's funnier.. and very weird... but yours sounds like a more tired person crawling to bed... nice... enjoyed this .. keep it ip ^^

Yanno. It's funny because as I wrote it I saw little ickle letters and words tumbling out of a near slumber girls ear and littering the floor. Like a writers discarded pages. I'm glad you like it so much. It's a very tired and a soul weary person calling it a night/an end.

Great job Bratling I enjoy reading your work I agree with Ray on that too it is verry descriptive. I could see it clearly as a person in a class room or at the kitchen table listening to the clock ticking and falling asleep finally going to bed and actually sleeping. Verry nice! keep it up.

So thats prity much your day? Hmm... well it was a great one! I always enjoy your work! Your so creative, its marvelouse! keep it up!

It was me sitting at my computer desk actually. Thinking being tired and wishing I could sleep forever. Sleep is really the ONLY thing I enjoy fully anymore. And only sicne I sleep so well. (I used ot have maaad insomnia.)

hum listening to the computer fan going then lol keep up the good petry I like it.