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    Red face Behind clouded eyes

    Do you know what lies in wait,

    Do you wish to feel my hate?

    Can you stand to watch me dare

    Can you see behing my clouded stare

    The dare I take

    The mistake I make

    To fall from Grace

    To fine what lies in wait...

    Do you wish to know
    what is in this place?
    The place where I fell from Holly Grace

    There is no coming back
    From where there is no light

    Could you stand to fight my hate
    when ther is no rite.

    Here this place where rite is wrong and
    left is rite.

    Where up is down
    and birds don't fly?

    where you can't scream
    and where you see my awful dream

    The dream where i was still a girl
    the dream where I wanted my hair to curl

    But now I have nightmares
    and my hair is staight
    where i paint my nails
    the color of my soul...

    Do you Dare to Dare as I do?
    Do You wish to follow me from Grace?
    Can you handel to know what lies in wait?
    Do you wish to seal your fate?
    Can you see behing my clouded stare
    Do you wish to Dare as I have Dared?

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    Re: Behind clouded eyes

    wow that was impressive keep it up

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
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    Re: Behind clouded eyes

    wow that a nice dark poem man, keep it up.

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    Re: Behind clouded eyes

    That was really good! You should like..turn
    it into a song! -Claps-

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    Re: Behind clouded eyes

    i like your sig!!!!!!!!!!! its kite right

    thank you equinn

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    Re: Behind clouded eyes

    This poem is well written, the intention is not really clear though ...but i'll give it 7/10 gd try ^^
    u mispelled this word "behind"

    Can you see behing my clouded stare

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