Ok everyone...I know I haven't posted a poem in FOREVER...and I am sorry I have had writers block terribly. Just so you all know this poem is probably really crappy. It's the best I could do at this moment. I hope you like ^-^
I see I am shaking but I know I shouldn't be afraid,
I never prayed for hope in the first place.
My face never seems to be the same.
Running with scissors, I never prayed for
sense in the first place.
It finally stopped raining for today.
I can still feel the glas shards breaking away.
Food looks white with blue sifting through.
The sun burns dull and the moon
burnt to nothing at noon.
Falling, I never prayed for wings in the first place.
Behind the black and white I knew a
useful world where we never ruined it.
I'll only last if that's what you want.
Changing, I never prayed to stay the same in the first place.
I'm glad to see you post a poem again ^^ I really am!!! And it's quite ok, I enjoyed reading it... it's very interesting...
It's sad but has some weird optimism in it after all- you say something sad and then say you never prayed for the good anyways... it's so weird but I can really understand it- life is as it is and there's no big use to change it...
I'll be really waiting forward for something more ^^
It took me rereading tihs to really like it. The first time I stumbled through it. But the second time I actually got it. I'm slow sometimes. I really like this. The way you presented it and worded everything. Beautiful I hope to see more of your writing.
Thank you both ^-^ It wasn't as good as I wanted it to be...but oh well...I tried. I am glad you both liked it anyhow :)