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    Bethany's Song

    (Imperfect French. Forgive me.)

    Où sont les étoiles si pas dans vos yeux*?
    Où est le soleil si pas dans votre sourire*?
    Quel est le monde sans votre rire*?
    Quel est mon chagrin sans vos déchirures*?

    Pourquoi vous tout êtes.
    Pour vous, je fais n'importe quoi.
    Pour vous, j'habite.
    Pour vous, j'aime.

    Quel est la musique si pas votre voix*?
    Quel est l'art si pas votre visage*?
    Quel est la beauté sans votre âme*?
    Quel est la passion sans votre amour*?

    Pourquoi vous êtes mon tout.
    Pour vous, je fais n'importe quoi.
    Pour vous, j'habite.
    Pour vous, j'aime.

    Pour vous me fait tout questionner
    Et a me rêvant de demain.

    (English translation.)

    Where are the stars if not in your eyes?
    Where is the sun if not in your smile?
    What is the world without your laugh?
    What is my sorrow without your tears?

    For you are my everything.
    For you, I would do anything.
    For you, I live.
    For you, I love.

    What is music if not your voice?
    What is art if not your face?
    What is beauty without your soul?
    What is passion without yor love?

    For you are my everything.
    For you, I would do anything.
    For you, I live.
    For you, I love.

    For you make me question everything
    And have me dreaming of tomorrow.

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    Re: Bethany's Song

    Words can't really explain what i've just read-
    BUT wow,that was REALLY good.Moved me a bit.

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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    Re: Bethany's Song

    That was great! I'm sure Ice Viper will love it! Good job divine I'm almost jealous. haha I liked the way that it all came together and flowed.

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    Re: Bethany's Song

    Quote Originally Posted by fireandice View Post
    That was great! I'm sure Ice Viper will love it! Good job divine I'm almost jealous. haha I liked the way that it all came together and flowed.
    Oh, everyone is so nice about my little song. I know the French isn't grammatically correct, but it's as close as a Spanish speaker can get it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by fireandice View Post
    That was great! I'm sure Ice Viper will love it! Good job divine I'm almost jealous. haha I liked the way that it all came together and flowed.
    I love how the song comes together divine. fireandice you shoudn't be jealaous after all he made you a song aswell. Thanks for the smiles!

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    Re: Bethany's Song

    2 thumbs up ^^ it's very sweet indeed... nice for a song... ^^ good job.. keep up the good work

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    Re: Bethany's Song

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    2 thumbs up ^^ it's very sweet indeed... nice for a song... ^^ good job.. keep up the good work
    Thanks, guys. It sounds better with the accompaniment I wrote for it on my guitar . . .

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    Re: Bethany's Song

    very good job Devine it was a verry moving poem and i liked it (well actually a song but still) keep up the good work alright? hope to see more from you
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