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    Re: Betrayal

    lol Rave and Eureka r funny ^^ ... anyway i really liked the poem cos the reader can feel the pain that ur trying to show. Good descriptive words used and also a nice flow throughout the poem

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    Re: Betrayal

    pain shows good disipline and loyalty and this is a nice poem nice work
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    Re: Betrayal

    Quote Originally Posted by Rave_Grip
    You wish ... reallly now
    Quote Originally Posted by Eureka-Seven16
    Dude do have some type of problem with me?
    Quote Originally Posted by HieisLove
    Please don't argue........
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