Wow that's really dark and sad at the same time. Good job on that one. It's not always possiable to bring out both thos emotions at the same time but you did it really well. It's a really good poem.
In a world where darkness resides all over,
The land where warmth is the only sign of hope,
A constant reminder that you’re alive and feeling,
But cannot escape the darkness
Welcome to a land where emancipation evaporates
Where rouge constantly flows through the spineless, sentimental stratum
The only thing you can do to keep the whole ... alive
Is not to slit
This is my heart, where fear consistently conquers the depths of my soul
Even if I try to relax, forget; constantly try to hope for the best
All I see is darkness, all I feel is warmth
All I hear is –
Ta dhump ... ta dhump .... Ta .. dhump ......................... ta dhump
My heart skips a beat
My eyes open out wide
Reality sets in
Staring nothing at particular
Except for the warm greeny shades, the gentle blue sky
The bright bars of golden light flowing from the heavens
Keeping me cozy, making me not to regret that I am existing and well kept
Whenever I think of you, I get lost and get dominated by the thoughts of you
This is what I feel, see and go through when I think of you
You are my warmth; you are the one conceiving exultancy within me
You are my addiction, you are my rouge
You make me skip my heartbeats
What have you done to me? I laugh out aloud.
Oh god will I die if I let go of her?
Again I close my eyes, knowing I can’t have you ...
All those thoughts flood in. I start to give up on hope ...
Just as when I feel a amalgam of cool and warm wind
Gently caress my face
As if it were real.
Wow that's really dark and sad at the same time. Good job on that one. It's not always possiable to bring out both thos emotions at the same time but you did it really well. It's a really good poem.
awwww such a sad yet great love poem ..... who's the lucky girl u likes ^^ great poem
Woohoo! 2 strikes! Thank you girls, but this is just a poem ^_^ candies for you all.
@FAI - The bottom part where it starts with the sun was supposed to lighten up the mood :O
this is truly a lovely poem with lots of feelings... there are so many images that come to mind while reading this.. it was beautifully written.
I don't think that i will ever forget it. You have such feelings for this person and i know that she will love it.
Keep up the good work.
To be honest though.. it should have a title.. hidden or not.
wow^^ very descriptive words, i enjoyed reading it! u did a good job![]()
I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the GreatestThank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen
Haha, thank you Jamie and everyone, I appreciate it. The reason I didn't put a title is that I just didn't know what to call it.
wow thats really sad but i did enjoy reading it! it rememinds me of my died heart!
sasuke is mine.
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