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    Better Place

    You close your eyes
    Take your last breath
    I'm sitting beside you
    Wishing you'd stay
    But you are going
    To a good place
    That's the only comfort
    In my heart
    As I walk away
    I shed a tear
    But at least I know
    You are going
    To a better place.....
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    Àddïctëd tø |ăüghïñg :) Sonny Sunshine Champion, Volcano Champion, Aquarium Sprengischen Champion, Spiderman Web of Words Champion, Look Alive Champion iluvmyloser is off to a good start iluvmyloser's Avatar
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    Re: Better Place

    you go sis.dont worry ill back you up anyway you know ill get them good!!woohoo great poem alot of emotions good job
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    Re: Better Place

    Great poem Akura!!!!!! I really enjoy it a lot!!!!!! It's a bit sad but I LOVED TOO MUCH!!!!!! I hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Better Place

    wow, i lalready made enemies. WHO GIVE A FU**! HAHAH!

    It's cute hun. I won't bitch. You cant handle my bitchness. Nice poek Kay?

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    Re: Better Place

    Aww I love it. Its a great poem..
    God I love it you are a very good writer.
    I hope to see more.

    ~Falling in love one step at a time~
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    Re: Better Place

    Woohoo yeah another enemie!!!! princesslady, go get a life please and thank you.

    As for the rest of you, you all are the best! Thank you! Especialy you sis!



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    Re: Better Place

    Since we cant be civil this thread gets the axe.

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