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    In-between the Pain

    Colours start to form,
    No longer only black and white.
    More complex designs appear,
    Crushing all my hopes and dreams.

    Simplicity is all I asked for,
    A life of ideal bliss.
    Far from reach and reality,
    Destined to live a life I can't handle.

    Why torture me so?
    To bid on when I would crack?
    Watching me suffer more and more,
    Pointing and laughing at me.

    Life's never going to be the same,
    My pain is always going to be there.
    Cutting me from the inside,
    Bleeding out slowly in-between the pain.

    Just a little poem of how I am feeling really.
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    Re: In-between the Pain

    Quote Originally Posted by Sazzy View Post
    Simplicity is all I asked for,
    A life of ideal bliss.
    Far from reach and reality,
    Destined to live a life I can't handle.
    How tragic! Well, we on AO are here for you, mate.

    (That is my favourite stanza! Something about it is just so . . . cathartic. Beautiful. I hope to see more from you.)

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    Re: In-between the Pain

    thank you Divine. Yeah its my favourite part too... just found it hard how to follow that stanza.

    just finding it hard with being unemployed and unable to find a job I want and then also deciding if I should get another degree. too many decisions to make, its what the poem is about, being stuck with too many things to handle in one go.
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    Re: In-between the Pain

    I agree with Devine Dancy, I like the poem though it is different. good job keep it up!
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    Re: In-between the Pain

    soounds really sad like you dont have friends there to help you, and in all you dont have a lot of security. I hope you feel better! and wonderfull work keep it up!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: In-between the Pain

    Life decisions are hard. Don't give up. If you need someone to talk to, I'm always here. But if stress produces this kind of poem, maybe it isn't all bad.

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    Re: In-between the Pain

    Thank you for the support, its much appreciated

    Living on an island doesn't help where most of my friends here are not in contact so yeah. hopefully things will change.
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    Re: In-between the Pain

    Your welcome Dancy like devine said if you need to talk I am here like you were there when I needed it. dont forget to PM if you have ANYTHING you want to talk about
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