Beware!!

BEWARE !! Lest ye should incur my wrath !
'Tis dangerous now, seek not that path
For on this day I have been scorned
And you, my fellows, have been warned
I am not of a light-hearted mood
You’d do well to leave me, while I brood
It may be said that I am fey
As would any who had lived my day
So hearken well, and heed my words
I do not wish to be disturbed !!!

Wow, I like this poem as well. The wording is just spectacular. just remember, 4 created threads a day.

Not bad at all. i mean it. I love the flow and the wordings. Keep it up ^_^

Agree with those above me ^^
and wow u sound scary :p i shall keep away now~

Your poem has a fantastic rhythm, so good job about that. The rhythm and the theme made it an interesting and worthwhile read for me. However, I feel that the double and triple exclamation marks were unecessary, and that you could do with only one mark. I think your choice of words were sufficient in making your mood in the poem clear enough. I also feel the same way about the all caps. Anyways, good job ^^

wow! be cautious everyone!
i like it..
Reading it makes me feel that you are
very dangerous... VERY eh? hehehe...

Thanks all of you! ^^

I'm really a nice girl...honestly lol.

It's just if somebody winds me up in a bad way then that's what they get!

I'm glad you all liked it.

I like this poem it sounds like what someone would say in a movie before a battle started.