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    Beware!!

    BEWARE !! Lest ye should incur my wrath !
    'Tis dangerous now, seek not that path
    For on this day I have been scorned
    And you, my fellows, have been warned
    I am not of a light-hearted mood
    You’d do well to leave me, while I brood
    It may be said that I am fey
    As would any who had lived my day
    So hearken well, and heed my words
    I do not wish to be disturbed !!!

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    Re: Beware!!

    Wow, I like this poem as well. The wording is just spectacular. just remember, 4 created threads a day.
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    Re: Beware!!

    Not bad at all. i mean it. I love the flow and the wordings. Keep it up ^_^

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    Re: Beware!!

    Agree with those above me ^^
    and wow u sound scary i shall keep away now~

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    Re: Beware!!

    Your poem has a fantastic rhythm, so good job about that. The rhythm and the theme made it an interesting and worthwhile read for me. However, I feel that the double and triple exclamation marks were unecessary, and that you could do with only one mark. I think your choice of words were sufficient in making your mood in the poem clear enough. I also feel the same way about the all caps. Anyways, good job ^^

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    Re: Beware!!

    wow! be cautious everyone!
    i like it..
    Reading it makes me feel that you are
    very dangerous... VERY eh? hehehe...

    If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
    I don't mind and you don't matter

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    Thanks all of you! ^^

    I'm really a nice girl...honestly lol.

    It's just if somebody winds me up in a bad way then that's what they get!

    I'm glad you all liked it.

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    Re: Beware!!

    I like this poem it sounds like what someone would say in a movie before a battle started.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
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