OoOoOoO THIS is good poem the wording had me thinking a bit but after I got the meaning I really like it.Keep it up.(^.^)
Oo.. I like this Shame you couldn't make it longer, but I guess it suits the mood, being angry and all XD Very nice use of words ^^
Ooooh I love the hint of old english... Very original. Reminded me of my junior year sitting in my shakespeare class.. Almost like a scene from Richard the III.
... Not Ever Again...