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  1. Sep 23, 2006 12:10 AM #1
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    Bewildered

    Bewildered


    Too many questions,
    Too many Answers,
    I am confused...

    Our destiny isn't clear,
    We never knew it,
    It is left untold...

    Days pass by,
    We learn new things,
    Still,I'm bewildered...

    Problems ahead,
    New faces we meet,
    We just don't know...

    There are many things,
    Many objects to see,
    This is a human's life...


    ---->This is another poem of mine,hope you like it...

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    This poem was actually made from my mind...

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    Sorry for double-posting anyways...

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    triple posting???
    back on the poem : i liked the theme for your poem, but the poem needs more description... i advice to reconstruct the poem...

    <that's what i think...

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    Thanks for your advice then,the new format in posting just confused me that's why I have triple-posts...

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