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    Beyond The Dark

    This poem is about my wonderful boyfriend who I love very much ^-^ I hope you all enjoy it.




    I sit anxiously close to my window waiting to catch
    a blue of blue.

    I never knew I could be so patient, so kind,
    so calm, I'd wait for a million dawns.

    Finding my place on your arms
    my mind goes to peace.

    Your eyes close and your breath gets deep.
    My hand snakes its way in between your fingers.
    My mouth curves into a smile.

    My mind wanders through the park through
    my snowy yard, the heat of your bedroom,
    the cool of my sheets, and the shape of your lips.

    Your voice soothes the pounding in my
    ears when I see your face at first.

    The words you speak give me hope
    for tomorrow and the future.

    Nose to nose I can feel your heart beat fast
    then soft.

    Your presence gives me meaning in a world
    where it lacks.

    I promise I'll always be here when you come
    back, always and forever is what I ask.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Beyond The Dark

    I think, the flow was off. The meter seemed weird when I read it aloud and in my mind.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Beyond The Dark

    This is really a very nice poem- full of true love! ^^ I enjoyed reading this soooo much!!! And it reminded me of what love is like- the most beautiful things in love... and it's just a wonderful feeling, thank you for that ^^

    I really, really like this!!! I hope to see more ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Beyond The Dark

    Thank you very much. I appreciate the compliment. It didn't take me long to write...it seems I write about love fairly easy ^-^
    Dear Dinah...

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