Beyond my door

Aya-kun · Jul 06, 2006, 05:08 AM

Upon reaching my hands to my door knob..
I felt my skin so pale and numb..
I gripped on tightly to my thumb..
What do I wish to see beyond the door?
Nothing but that love one I adore..
The door knob turns, the door sprung open.
A lil sun light shined and melt the coldness I felt before
You were there, streching out that wide palm of yours,
waiting for me to take in my hand.
The light was bright, the glare made me fright,
You were faceless, but i was fearless
for you who have that special aura I love.
You turned your face away,
you made me race after your sway.
The breeze blew my hair across my eyes,
Before I could see your smile, you lips were kissing mine mildly.
The feeling of doubt beated in my heart,
As my hands couldn't feel you no more.
Your body became mist,
I cried to make you stay and insist.
The wind that was once calm became violent,
The short moment of joy became silent..
I slapped myself in the cheeks ,crying out so loud
to find that it was all dream of trying so hard.
For it was impossible to reach out to that world with him beyond my door.
"I can never step out from this door step with you"
The light refleted some hopes to my door,
and there lay me sitting and waiting for you.
To come and get me for real someday...

:: dedicated to that non-existence love ::

sora the king of dreams · Jul 06, 2006, 05:16 AM

awww that touched my Heart *Tears up*

really Good, but next time don't make it really touching because I almost cryed.

Adarrah · Jul 06, 2006, 06:48 AM

Nice... it is touching^^ Is this about love?

Aya-kun · Jul 06, 2006, 06:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adarrah

Nice... it is touching^^ Is this about love?

a love that never exist .... (-_-) im so sad >.<

*hugs sora-san's feet* thanks for being the first to comment >.<

sora the king of dreams · Jul 06, 2006, 07:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aya-kun

a love that never exist .... (-_-) im so sad >.<

*hugs sora-san's feet* thanks for being the first to comment >.<

*smiles*

anything for a Friend and it was really touching.

*Blade X* · Jul 06, 2006, 10:53 AM

to waiting for someone who u nvr met.....someone u think u love but have nvr met...u yearn for someone to be there on the otherside of the door.....smiling and waiting for u with open arms.........nice poem aya-kun *hugs* u r a nice girl...jus hope tht u find someone who deserves u or is good for u

Aya-kun · Jul 06, 2006, 11:03 AM

thanks blade-san... (>_<)
i wish that i never knew what love is all about so that it wont affect me anymore. But I've failed to deny that love is needed >_<
sob..

Satoko_Hyuuga · Jul 06, 2006, 12:29 PM

What a nice poem. I like it.

You should post up more poems of yours. I bet your poem touched everyone.

Aya-kun · Jul 07, 2006, 05:27 AM

Thank you satoko-san. I'll try (^__^)

Reese · Jul 07, 2006, 11:11 AM

Touching poem Aya-kun.

Nice job with this one... *Sigh* My comments are not very contructive today. But it was an enjoyable poem, I look forward to reading more of your work. ^_^ JOURNAL ENTRY!!! hehe.

Edit :
Nice piccy, you look COOLA!! depressed? .... O_O;; ehehehe... =_=

*Tano-kun* · Jul 07, 2006, 02:02 PM

i love hearing poems once in awhile....that was so awesome...just keep it up...hope u wirite more in the future...

Jul 06, 2006, 05:08 AM	#1 (permalink)
Aya-kun Stray Sheep Join Date: May 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 905 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post Credits: 6,613	Beyond my door Upon reaching my hands to my door knob.. I felt my skin so pale and numb.. I gripped on tightly to my thumb.. What do I wish to see beyond the door? Nothing but that love one I adore.. The door knob turns, the door sprung open. A lil sun light shined and melt the coldness I felt before You were there, streching out that wide palm of yours, waiting for me to take in my hand. The light was bright, the glare made me fright, You were faceless, but i was fearless for you who have that special aura I love. You turned your face away, you made me race after your sway. The breeze blew my hair across my eyes, Before I could see your smile, you lips were kissing mine mildly. The feeling of doubt beated in my heart, As my hands couldn't feel you no more. Your body became mist, I cried to make you stay and insist. The wind that was once calm became violent, The short moment of joy became silent.. I slapped myself in the cheeks ,crying out so loud to find that it was all dream of trying so hard. For it was impossible to reach out to that world with him beyond my door. "I can never step out from this door step with you" The light refleted some hopes to my door, and there lay me sitting and waiting for you. To come and get me for real someday... :: dedicated to that non-existence love :: __________________ +Blog's MOVED -- Find sheep at Paper Diaries Now!+ Last edited by Aya-kun; Jul 06, 2006 at 07:22 AM.
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sora the king of dreams Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: I live in a Place where I'am Truly Happy and that would be with All My Friends Posts: 419 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 458	Re: Beyond my door awww that touched my Heart Tears up really Good, but next time don't make it really touching because I almost cryed. __________________ I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am. A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao. http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm
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Adarrah Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 320 Thanks: 3 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,795	Re: Beyond my door Nice... it is touching^^ Is this about love? __________________ Carve an amble now, Saying that the day's still bright, And let's play with time.
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Blade X AO's Demon Slayer Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one. Posts: 1,606 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,446	Re: Beyond my door to waiting for someone who u nvr met.....someone u think u love but have nvr met...u yearn for someone to be there on the otherside of the door.....smiling and waiting for u with open arms.........nice poem aya-kun hugs u r a nice girl...jus hope tht u find someone who deserves u or is good for u __________________ Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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Aya-kun Stray Sheep Join Date: May 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 905 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post Credits: 6,613	Re: Beyond my door thanks blade-san... (>_<) i wish that i never knew what love is all about so that it wont affect me anymore. But I've failed to deny that love is needed >_< sob.. __________________ +Blog's MOVED -- Find sheep at Paper Diaries Now!+
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Satoko_Hyuuga Newbie Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Blaine Posts: 37 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 436	Re: Beyond my door What a nice poem. I like it. You should post up more poems of yours. I bet your poem touched everyone.
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Aya-kun Stray Sheep Join Date: May 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 905 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post Credits: 6,613	Re: Beyond my door Thank you satoko-san. I'll try (^__^) __________________ +Blog's MOVED -- Find sheep at Paper Diaries Now!+
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Reese Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: "Enigma" Posts: 228 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,158	Re: Beyond my door Touching poem Aya-kun. Nice job with this one... Sigh My comments are not very contructive today. But it was an enjoyable poem, I look forward to reading more of your work. ^_^ JOURNAL ENTRY!!! hehe. Edit : Nice piccy, you look COOLA!! depressed? .... O_O;; ehehehe... =_= __________________
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Tano-kun Laid Back Otaku Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: my personal safehaven Posts: 553 Thanks: 6 Thanked 7 Times in 5 Posts Credits: 1,790	Re: Beyond my door i love hearing poems once in awhile....that was so awesome...just keep it up...hope u wirite more in the future...
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