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Stray Sheep Join Date: May 2006 Location: Malaysia
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![]() ![]() Credits: 6,613 | Beyond my door Upon reaching my hands to my door knob.. I felt my skin so pale and numb.. I gripped on tightly to my thumb.. What do I wish to see beyond the door? Nothing but that love one I adore.. The door knob turns, the door sprung open. A lil sun light shined and melt the coldness I felt before You were there, streching out that wide palm of yours, waiting for me to take in my hand. The light was bright, the glare made me fright, You were faceless, but i was fearless for you who have that special aura I love. You turned your face away, you made me race after your sway. The breeze blew my hair across my eyes, Before I could see your smile, you lips were kissing mine mildly. The feeling of doubt beated in my heart, As my hands couldn't feel you no more. Your body became mist, I cried to make you stay and insist. The wind that was once calm became violent, The short moment of joy became silent.. I slapped myself in the cheeks ,crying out so loud to find that it was all dream of trying so hard. For it was impossible to reach out to that world with him beyond my door. "I can never step out from this door step with you" The light refleted some hopes to my door, and there lay me sitting and waiting for you. To come and get me for real someday... ![]() :: dedicated to that non-existence love :: Last edited by Aya-kun; Jul 06, 2006 at 07:22 AM. |
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Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: I live in a Place where I'am Truly Happy and that would be with All My Friends
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![]() ![]() Credits: 458 | Re: Beyond my door awww that touched my Heart *Tears up* really Good, but next time don't make it really touching because I almost cryed. ![]()
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![]() ![]() Credits: 6,613 | Re: Beyond my door Quote:
*hugs sora-san's feet* thanks for being the first to comment >.< | |
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Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: I live in a Place where I'am Truly Happy and that would be with All My Friends
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![]() ![]() Credits: 458 | Re: Beyond my door Quote:
anything for a Friend and it was really touching. ![]()
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![]() AO's Demon Slayer Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,446 | Re: Beyond my door to waiting for someone who u nvr met.....someone u think u love but have nvr met...u yearn for someone to be there on the otherside of the door.....smiling and waiting for u with open arms.........nice poem aya-kun *hugs* u r a nice girl...jus hope tht u find someone who deserves u or is good for u
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![]() ![]() Credits: 6,613 | Re: Beyond my door thanks blade-san... (>_<) i wish that i never knew what love is all about so that it wont affect me anymore. But I've failed to deny that love is needed >_< sob.. |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,158 | Re: Beyond my door Touching poem Aya-kun. Nice job with this one... *Sigh* My comments are not very contructive today. But it was an enjoyable poem, I look forward to reading more of your work. ^_^ JOURNAL ENTRY!!! hehe.Edit : Nice piccy, you look COOLA!! depressed? .... O_O;; ehehehe... =_=
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,790 | i love hearing poems once in awhile....that was so awesome...just keep it up...hope u wirite more in the future... |
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