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    * The big challenge *

    The big challenge
    When you try to love someone not for you
    The big challenge
    When you try to smile and your eyes full off tears
    The big challenge
    When you try to laugh and your heart just hurt
    The big challenge
    When you try to save life someone was hurt you
    The big challenge
    When you know someone who is so hard to say goodbye too
    The big challenge
    When you try to close your eyes to things you do not want to see it
    But the biggest challenge
    When you try to close your heart to things you do not want to feel it

    Hope you enjoy it...

    Foolish beating

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    Re: * The big challenge *

    Wow!!! This poem is great... It made my heart beat faster... and my hands are shaking... it is just so true, won-der-ful work!!! I love it!!! Your poems are so much about life, your poems are just wonderful xxoxx- short but tells a lot (what could be better?)

    A nice work here xxoxx, I'll be waiting forward for more!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: * The big challenge *

    Well thank you very much Lasura...
    and this poem in many ways is true ...It's short but what shall i will do with my mind ...

    Foolish beating

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