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    the big red button


    To shape the face of the earth
    you need a little brush and a big red button to push.
    A piece of patience and a dash of hope
    A sprinkle of peace and a mountain full of corruption
    To use the little brush be very careful
    you can't make any mistakes!
    be very percise
    always use a sharp pencil
    to draw out your plans
    you only have 7 days
    But whatever you do don't push the big red button
    You'll have a guideline to draw but don't worry
    anything that happens won't
    be your fault
    Place the pieces in the correct spot
    cut, past, redraw, print
    repeat.
    draw the rivers, the mountains, plains, grass,
    seas, oceans, people, buildings
    you control it all

    but the one thing you must never do is push the big red button.
    The pencil is in your hands
    you have the power
    it feels good doesn't it?
    piece the puzzle together
    color, trace, tape, redraw
    repeat.
    oh and don't forget to add a
    sliver of viollence,
    a small package full of disception
    look at what you've done!
    you magnificent creature
    now...look at it
    one last thing to do is to create the humans
    make them anyway you like
    tall, short, fat, skinny
    ugly, pretty, in-between, handsome
    thats it... good good good!
    add the eyes, teeth
    hair, organs and limbs
    ok you messed up on some...
    but no one's perfect now instill in them
    evil, love anger
    discreet, deception,
    kind and understanding
    And so much more!

    you have made everything and everything
    will take care of its self
    now take a look at it
    look at what you've done
    hahaha you've opened Pandora's box
    And you see... you begin to see a face
    a dessesembled face
    it looks familiar...
    you recognize the face?
    ha look again!
    look once more!
    And Again!
    Do you finally understand?
    This place...
    this horrible palce you've created resembles you face!
    you see!
    the face of the earth is Your Face!
    You have created everything and everything
    will take care of itself!
    You've opened Pandora's box!
    look at all this!
    nothing but devestation, harships
    and destruction!
    ha you stupid fool
    the shape of the earth...

    the face you've created
    is Your face
    You've done this
    not i
    Do not blame me
    for your mistakes.
    ha stupid fool
    the dissembled face comes to light
    the pieces are forming and joining
    look at the mirror
    It is your favce!
    look again at this pitiful world
    you've created!
    so dreary and gloom
    you wanna know the best thing you should do...
    look, look LOOK in the mirror!
    a face, a face aFACE you see!
    its yours, you have no choice
    but to claim it

    the shape of the face of the earth is
    your Face!
    tsk tsk tsk! a shame you are
    did you not realize your misakes?
    ..
    the big red button?
    what about you may never push it.
    don't even look at it..
    the p;urpose of the big red button?
    to put an end to your creation.
    every creator has a choice.
    to mold and shape the face of the earth to their liking with my help of course
    why do you thnk the earth changes so much?
    Creators come in and out
    in and out...
    never once does the Big Boss
    ever approve
    but i see you want to destroy what've
    already been created?
    i cannot stop you from pushing the
    button any longet
    It is your choice
    to push the big red button if you wish
    but what you destroy you can never build the
    same way again!

    Sadly, for by the time you pust that button you will be sent down
    and be destroyed as well.
    but so eager!
    to change the world for the sake of humanity!
    oh what a fool!
    to sacrifice your own life
    for others who will not thank you for it!
    but you've made your choice
    what a pitifulo soul
    as for me?

    I am chained here for the rest of earthly internity
    unitl the Last One creator
    arrives and sets me free........
    one day soon.....

    To shape the face of the earth
    you need a little brush and a big red button to push
    A piece of patience and a dash of hope
    A sprinkle of peace anda mountain
    full of corruption
    To use the little brush be very careful!
    be very percise!
    always use a sharp pencil
    to draw out your palns
    You only have 7 days....
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen

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    Re: the big red button

    that is so freakin awesome i mean wow and you were trying to keep this talent to yourself for shame share this gift with the world
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: the big red button

    This tickled me... it was long, maybe even too long. But I enjoyed it so I barely noticed. It could use some care in the editing as far as spelling , punctuation, even some flat out type-o's. But I loved how I was being "talked at". Sort of put in the place of God? And giving the idea of more than one creator was brilliant too... especially having ended the piece as it started... Like you were training in the New God.

    Also, kudo's on the Title. Quite attractive. I HAD to read it... it was like not being able to resist a big red button.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: the big red button

    Really interesting poem blackrose
    I didn't really expected to hear such a good poem from you.
    Although it is a little to long it's a very good poem (in my opinion) and is a goood thing you ended with the same piece that you started with.
    I felt I was the creator to whom God (I asume it was God who was talking) was talking to
    You need to be more careful on your spelling and punctuation.

    "If you need something to worship, then worship life - all life, every last crawling bit of it! We're all in this beauty together!" - Frank Herbert

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