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    Cool Birdie ( sorry again high on sugar )

    Birdie, birdie, in the sky,
    why'd you do that in my eye?
    Looks like sugar,
    Tastes like sap,
    OMG! IT'S BIRDIE CRAP!

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    Re: Birdie ( sorry again high on sugar )

    lol Thats funny! Even though it wasn't much I liked it. Bird crap is actually why I fear birds over my head. But anyways, I liked the poem.^_^

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    Re: Birdie ( sorry again high on sugar )

    ahihih, nice one..
    avoid short cutting terms,
    its much better read..

    although it made me smile..
    ahehehe

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    Re: Birdie ( sorry again high on sugar )

    How could this person possibly know what crap tastes like. Especially since it fell into his eye.

    It'd be wise to think about these things in logical terms when writing. It'll make it better for you and for the reader.

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