bitter coldness

kasandra · Apr 18, 2009, 11:03 AM

There is a bitter coldness with us all.
hiding away form others.
It comes to the surface when we get made.
The bitter coldness we wish we never had.
It is hard to control it.
It is hard to ignore it.
We try to hard it tires us out.
So we try our best till the end of our day,
To end our bitter coldness.

runt32a · Apr 25, 2009, 12:10 PM

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Originally Posted by kasandra

There is a bitter coldness with us all.
hiding away form others.
It comes to the surface when we get made.
The bitter coldness we wish we never had.
It is hard to control it.
It is hard to ignore it.
We try to hard it tires us out.
So we try our best till the end of our day,
To end our bitter coldness.

thats good and true kinda short but good and true hope to read more of your writeings

kasandra · Apr 25, 2009, 12:14 PM

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Originally Posted by runt32a

thats good and true kinda short but good and true hope to read more of your writeings

Thank you! I was writing what cam to my mind and put it all together. Though i am very happy that it came out all right. I have more on one of my flash drives i will put it on this site when i have copied them down. So i hope you like the next ones as well. Aagin tahnk you!

runt32a · Apr 25, 2009, 12:17 PM

well it is my pleasure i truly did enjoy it and i can understand that myself i write poems and songs myself yours is very good and i look forward to being abile to read more of your poems

kasandra · Apr 25, 2009, 12:22 PM

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Originally Posted by runt32a

well it is my pleasure i truly did enjoy it and i can understand that myself i write poems and songs myself yours is very good and i look forward to being abile to read more of your poems

I guess it is becuase i like to write things for my books. though none of them are done yet. I had 2 versions of one it was called demon and well the new version i made ended up being deleted. So i am working with the old version. But hey it is truning out to be realy good for the ost part. So what kinda of songs do you write?

runt32a · Apr 25, 2009, 12:29 PM

thats great to hear and as for my songs they are normally inspiring sometimes a bit deap but my poems fall more with being deep and dark although i have a few that aren't that dark among my poems i can post some of them and let you read em i posted my latest poem yesterday i may post my older ones through out the week if you want to read them all at once that i have posted somewhere else then you can go to runt32a's Pages

kasandra · Apr 25, 2009, 12:33 PM

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Originally Posted by runt32a

thats great to hear and as for my songs they are normally inspiring sometimes a bit deap but my poems fall more with being deep and dark although i have a few that aren't that dark among my poems i can post some of them and let you read em i posted my latest poem yesterday i may post my older ones through out the week if you want to read them all at once that i have posted somewhere else then you can go to runt32a's Pages

They are realy good. I got to say you got some talent.

runt32a · Apr 25, 2009, 12:35 PM

i honestly dont think i have that much talent in this stuff i just write whatever come to my mind through what im thinking and feeling but thank you anyways

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kasandra Newbie Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: cold dark cave Posts: 14 Thanks: 10 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	bitter coldness There is a bitter coldness with us all. hiding away form others. It comes to the surface when we get made. The bitter coldness we wish we never had. It is hard to control it. It is hard to ignore it. We try to hard it tires us out. So we try our best till the end of our day, To end our bitter coldness. __________________
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runt32a Newbie Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: where i am needed Posts: 18 Thanks: 5 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts	Re: bitter coldness well it is my pleasure i truly did enjoy it and i can understand that myself i write poems and songs myself yours is very good and i look forward to being abile to read more of your poems __________________ "the past is full of crap from then, the present is full of shit from now and the future is full of nothing at all"
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runt32a Newbie Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: where i am needed Posts: 18 Thanks: 5 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts	Re: bitter coldness thats great to hear and as for my songs they are normally inspiring sometimes a bit deap but my poems fall more with being deep and dark although i have a few that aren't that dark among my poems i can post some of them and let you read em i posted my latest poem yesterday i may post my older ones through out the week if you want to read them all at once that i have posted somewhere else then you can go to runt32a's Pages __________________ "the past is full of crap from then, the present is full of shit from now and the future is full of nothing at all"
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runt32a Newbie Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: where i am needed Posts: 18 Thanks: 5 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts	Re: bitter coldness i honestly dont think i have that much talent in this stuff i just write whatever come to my mind through what im thinking and feeling but thank you anyways __________________ "the past is full of crap from then, the present is full of shit from now and the future is full of nothing at all"
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