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    Smile bitter coldness

    There is a bitter coldness with us all.
    hiding away form others.
    It comes to the surface when we get made.
    The bitter coldness we wish we never had.
    It is hard to control it.
    It is hard to ignore it.
    We try to hard it tires us out.
    So we try our best till the end of our day,
    To end our bitter coldness.

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    Quote Originally Posted by kasandra View Post
    There is a bitter coldness with us all.
    hiding away form others.
    It comes to the surface when we get made.
    The bitter coldness we wish we never had.
    It is hard to control it.
    It is hard to ignore it.
    We try to hard it tires us out.
    So we try our best till the end of our day,
    To end our bitter coldness.
    thats good and true kinda short but good and true hope to read more of your writeings
    "the past is full of crap from then, the present is full of shit from now and the future is full of nothing at all"

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    Re: bitter coldness

    Quote Originally Posted by runt32a View Post
    thats good and true kinda short but good and true hope to read more of your writeings
    Thank you! I was writing what cam to my mind and put it all together. Though i am very happy that it came out all right. I have more on one of my flash drives i will put it on this site when i have copied them down. So i hope you like the next ones as well. Aagin tahnk you!

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    well it is my pleasure i truly did enjoy it and i can understand that myself i write poems and songs myself yours is very good and i look forward to being abile to read more of your poems
    "the past is full of crap from then, the present is full of shit from now and the future is full of nothing at all"

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    Quote Originally Posted by runt32a View Post
    well it is my pleasure i truly did enjoy it and i can understand that myself i write poems and songs myself yours is very good and i look forward to being abile to read more of your poems
    I guess it is becuase i like to write things for my books. though none of them are done yet. I had 2 versions of one it was called demon and well the new version i made ended up being deleted. So i am working with the old version. But hey it is truning out to be realy good for the ost part. So what kinda of songs do you write?

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    thats great to hear and as for my songs they are normally inspiring sometimes a bit deap but my poems fall more with being deep and dark although i have a few that aren't that dark among my poems i can post some of them and let you read em i posted my latest poem yesterday i may post my older ones through out the week if you want to read them all at once that i have posted somewhere else then you can go to runt32a's Pages
    "the past is full of crap from then, the present is full of shit from now and the future is full of nothing at all"

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    Quote Originally Posted by runt32a View Post
    thats great to hear and as for my songs they are normally inspiring sometimes a bit deap but my poems fall more with being deep and dark although i have a few that aren't that dark among my poems i can post some of them and let you read em i posted my latest poem yesterday i may post my older ones through out the week if you want to read them all at once that i have posted somewhere else then you can go to runt32a's Pages
    They are realy good. I got to say you got some talent.

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    i honestly dont think i have that much talent in this stuff i just write whatever come to my mind through what im thinking and feeling but thank you anyways
    "the past is full of crap from then, the present is full of shit from now and the future is full of nothing at all"

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