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    Bitter Truth

    Here's my newest poem. I haven't written much in a while, and it's longer then most my poems. I think I might have gotten a bit carried away on this one.. well anyway tell me what you think.

    Bitter Truth-

    Sleeping inside the darkness
    Drowning in your lies
    One day I’ll forget you
    And I’ll be just fine

    I felt more for you
    Then I’ve ever felt for anyone in this life
    But you betrayed my trust
    And left me alone again
    The cold air washes over me
    It’s hard to breath in

    Never thought I’d feel like this
    Worse off then I was before
    Just want to say thanks
    For this mess you left in my heart

    The gloom spreads fast
    And pulses through my veins
    I’ve been forgotten once more
    Will my soul every be whole

    You gave me happiness
    And took it all away
    Like a recovering drug addict
    All I want is what I long to forget
    All I want is what I can’t have

    But your there inside
    In the back of my mind
    Whispering memories to me
    Why can’t I just shut the door?
    Shut the door on you

    A ghost of you
    Echoes in my head
    Stop haunting me please
    All I truly want is for you to leave me be
    I don’t want to feel these things for you
    Not anymore

    I am alone
    No matter what my imagination wants to tell me
    No matter what I want to think
    And I don’t believe anymore
    Love was just a fairytale
    An illusion too good to be considered real
    I am on my own now
    It's just the bitter truth

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    Re: Bitter Truth

    wow, i mean like about a person you want to forget and have that certain person stay away, but its nice real artistic, keep it up, hope to hear more from you

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    Re: Bitter Truth

    That was a very nice poem. It was well written and had alot of good and bad emotions in it. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more.

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    Re: Bitter Truth

    Wow, nice and long like mine lol I liked it a lot, and it's very true. Almost everyone can relate to those feelings. Can't wait to read more.
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    Re: Bitter Truth

    This was very good and something that I can relate to. I hope to see more of your works in the future. Keep it up!
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