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Reply With Quotewow, i mean like about a person you want to forget and have that certain person stay away, but its nice real artistic, keep it up, hope to hear more from you
Here's my newest poem. I haven't written much in a while, and it's longer then most my poems. I think I might have gotten a bit carried away on this one.. well anyway tell me what you think.
Bitter Truth-
Sleeping inside the darkness
Drowning in your lies
One day I’ll forget you
And I’ll be just fine
I felt more for you
Then I’ve ever felt for anyone in this life
But you betrayed my trust
And left me alone again
The cold air washes over me
It’s hard to breath in
Never thought I’d feel like this
Worse off then I was before
Just want to say thanks
For this mess you left in my heart
The gloom spreads fast
And pulses through my veins
I’ve been forgotten once more
Will my soul every be whole
You gave me happiness
And took it all away
Like a recovering drug addict
All I want is what I long to forget
All I want is what I can’t have
But your there inside
In the back of my mind
Whispering memories to me
Why can’t I just shut the door?
Shut the door on you
A ghost of you
Echoes in my head
Stop haunting me please
All I truly want is for you to leave me be
I don’t want to feel these things for you
Not anymore
I am alone
No matter what my imagination wants to tell me
No matter what I want to think
And I don’t believe anymore
Love was just a fairytale
An illusion too good to be considered real
I am on my own now
It's just the bitter truth
wow, i mean like about a person you want to forget and have that certain person stay away, but its nice real artistic, keep it up, hope to hear more from you
That was a very nice poem. It was well written and had alot of good and bad emotions in it. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more.
Wow, nice and long like mine lol I liked it a lot, and it's very true. Almost everyone can relate to those feelings. Can't wait to read more.
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
This was very good and something that I can relate to. I hope to see more of your works in the future. Keep it up!
You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.
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