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    Bittersweet love

    A love without pain and sorrow ceases to exsist,
    but in exchange for a moment of happiness,
    love offers you endless pain.

    It's very short and not very good but that's all I could think up at the moment.

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    Re: Bittersweet love

    It was a nice poem. I just wish it could've been longer cause it was getting interesting. I look forward to reading your next one.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
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    Thanks so much I love it!

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    Re: Bittersweet love

    It was redundant. If there is already pain, and then happiness for a moment, there is still pain.

    Try using another word for pain. The thesaurus is your friend.
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