It was a nice poem. I just wish it could've been longer cause it was getting interesting. I look forward to reading your next one.
A love without pain and sorrow ceases to exsist,
but in exchange for a moment of happiness,
love offers you endless pain.
It's very short and not very good but that's all I could think up at the moment.![]()
It was a nice poem. I just wish it could've been longer cause it was getting interesting. I look forward to reading your next one.
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Thanks so much I love it!
It was redundant. If there is already pain, and then happiness for a moment, there is still pain.
Try using another word for pain. The thesaurus is your friend.
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