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    Black Fire

    black fire will never dies it always lives on
    more people make his black fire more he hate and fear them
    the black fire burn wild and strong
    as fire binds him is same fire that begins him on his hands and knees
    the pain of the fire burn tough his body making him hate and darkness
    the black fire is the same fire thats inside of everyone
    that makes his anger and hate and fear

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    Re: Black Fire

    umm... HUH? It is about something really abstract. You also have some grammatical errors with your 's in the end of words.
    every rose has a thorn

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    Re: Black Fire

    Capitalizatio would also give the porm a better look.
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