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    Black knight

    A black knight is amidst our folk
    Have You noticed him?
    He came quietly, sneaking,
    He is watching me right now-
    Cursing… planning…

    Have You seen him here?
    Creeping behind Your back,
    Lurking in the shadows,
    Reaching for Your neck,
    Craving for death.

    Have You spotted the first signs of a disease?
    Black spots? Empty words?
    Should we stop him?
    COULD we stop him?

    Are You ready to die for your home?
    Are You ready to lie Your heads before our leader?
    Are You willing to fight?
    Do You have the strength to win?

    It’s taking over…
    I can feel him getting nearer…
    I’m next, I see…

    This was just a prophecy, a warning, an inducement,
    We must fight…

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Black knight

    Nice poem. I have to say though. It made me think of Monty Python and the Holy Grail. . .

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    Re: Black knight

    Hmm...i wonder why i read is fast paced.. @.@ exhilirating... nice.. good job on this 1 laura..!

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    Re: Black knight

    i love your poem!^^ i could see an actaully picture forming in my head^^ good job!
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    Re: Black knight

    Dark and a bit scary.Very good imagery. Part of me really wants to know more about what inspired this... But most of me enjoys the mystery of not knowing....

    And yes... as you can see my "break" did not last. A little over a week was all I could do.. I am weak... so weak... lol
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    Re: Black knight

    Niiiiice! ^_^

    I like this poem. There's a hint of suspense in it. It's like this looming feeling of doom coming near, yet nobody really notices it but you. Kimi no uta wa sugoi desu! (Your poem was great!) ^_^


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    Re: Black knight

    Thanks You all!!! Thanks shadowrules, thanks Ray, thanks backrose, thanks Peach and thanks Sprout!!! This was a very quick to write, very simple one... Well and it's to AO in... but I haven't actually noticed and black knights or plagues our mods couldn't deal with yet, though I was gone for quite a long time..

    @ shadowrules:
    Monty Python :"Holy Grail" lol ^^ I saw that... interesting... maybe it'was because I was in a good mood when I wrote this but the poem is quite serious.

    @ Peach:
    Actually I was inspired by that thread that was postwed before I left by someone who said we should stand up for ourselves, because the mods are controling us ~.~ And I'm glad u'r back!!!

    Thank You all again!!!!!!!!!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Black knight

    very cool i hope theres no one behind my back but yea nice poem

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