Thread: black rose

That was pretty well done. It showed me much more than one could expect from a lack of description.. Or maybe you just packed it all into the small words that words just as well?

Whatever way it all seemed to flow quite well, your rhymes were on the spot and they were uber-duper. The title wasn't capitalized but the rest of it seemed good on spelling and such.

I wonder though, what is this black rose you cannot reach? For what reason have you to cry, when there is beauty all around the world. Or maybe this rose is just the right one for you?

Anyway, I liked it. Kudos.

very nice im not very good at making poems the title reminds me of the character blackrose from dot hack

i liked it. i like how you stuck to one writing style but then switched it up at the end. it was a nice change of pace and unexpected. nice.