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Reply With QuoteAvea Shadows (Apr 29, 2010), Dragons2801 (Apr 29, 2010), kingmustang (Apr 29, 2010)
Black Rose
What are those tears that I see?
What is the anguish that I feel?
Why is she lying all alone on the hard floor?
Is she crying for forgiveness?
Is she weeping for the joy that she missed?
What is that in her hands?
Did she fall from grace never to return?
Where is her heart?
Did she misplace that as well?
How could this happen?
How could rose be gone?
Why is it so cold here?
What was the purpose of that rose?
That precious thing that is now gone forever?
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Avea Shadows (Apr 29, 2010), Dragons2801 (Apr 29, 2010), kingmustang (Apr 29, 2010)
it is amaising its been a long time since i read somthing this powerful and so full of emotions.
within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.
I agree this is a very powerful and sad poem. Love it!!!!Originally Posted by Dragons2801
Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
The school of the undefeated East! The winds of the king! Zenshin! Keiretsu! Tempa! Kyoran! Look! The East is burning red!” (G Gundam)
Ride Fast, Live Free & Stay strong.
This, was so powerful, I enjoyed it very much. You have a talent, a very good talent. I would love to read more, if only you will like to post them.
Living life on your own..Isn't always that easy..-Vincent
thanks you! It's been a long time since I had someone thank me for my work. I have 4 other poems on here as well. Thing 1, Thing 2, The lost one, Seward call
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-bows- My deepest pleasure. I enjoy reading poems, and writing them. I would love to read more =) I will show you a few of mines in return -bows-
Living life on your own..Isn't always that easy..-Vincent
Your poem is very good. I like it a lot. Recently i've been into poems and reading them. maybe i should start writing it.
A Soul Needs a Purpose to Live.- Gaara
yes you should start, it is a way for you to get your emmotions out or just to have fun. and i would like to read them as well same to you Avea i would like to see some of your poems, i cant waight to read them.
within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.
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