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    the blade

    Another night of pain.
    One more betrayal.
    I'm sick of all her lies,
    deceit, and greed.

    I shut the door,
    and lock it behind me.
    So many ways,
    all of them an open option
    for me.

    Just one little cut,
    not enough.
    I beg my precious blade,
    bite a little harder,
    just a little deeper.

    Than it will all be over.
    A rip and a gush,
    all the pain flows away,
    the deceit and betrayal
    pool around me.

    I'll be just fine.
    If you let me slit my wrists one last time.

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    Re: the blade

    I dunno about the whole emo, cutting thing... But I understand it...

    Either way, subject matter aside... I thought this poem was pretty good. Its a perfect explaination as to why a cutter would cut. To know that its not just for the sake of making the wound or getting attention.

    You could feel the meaning behind it... the release...
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: the blade

    now i aint a fan of emos but this poem is great it gets its point accross and thats a great thing really, so like to see more but try and keep the emo thing out

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    Re: the blade

    Cutting? @.@ eeh...not a good thing but the poem surely is good... ^^
    i like it... though it's kinda sad...

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    Re: the blade

    I like this poem!!!! I used to be emo so i can kind of relate to it!!!!! In some ways it reminds me of that sugarcult song "she's the blade" that song is awesome!!! Anyways nice poem i'd like to see more from you because i think your really talented

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