I liked this because I could tell you put a lot of thought and feeling into it. And it's a lot longer then most pieces you write.
I didn't care for the rhyme or flow though. It just didn't really work to me and it seemed forced. Aslo, I saw a lot of "I'm trying" in there. Which we aren't doing anymore. You and I, we DO not TRY!!


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