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    blame the gunman?

    wasn't sure what to call this...

    Sensless slayings
    And whos to blame
    Should we hate the shooter
    Or the ones who turned their face

    Teachers, advisors, acquaintances all say
    There were signs to be seen
    But they looked away

    Stories about death an hate
    But, of course, that was just a creative attempt
    Social outcast with issues
    But not considered a threat?

    Right ...

    Thats why they were screaming and crying
    Running for their lives
    All because advisors
    Couldnt see it in his eyes

    Blood lust and insanity
    So twisted and violent
    Taking children from their families
    But where were the authorities??

    hummm I'm not sure if I should leave this poem like this or change it up or add a different ending I'd like too see your suggestions

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    Re: blame the gunman?

    Is this about the Virginia incident?
    I like it, and capitalization too ^_^; And I love the last lines. Nice job.!

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    Re: blame the gunman?

    yeah its about that VT incident I'm not sure if it does a good job though but thanks Rave glad you liked it >.<

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    Re: blame the gunman?

    >.< It's a good job, just a little more complex words could be better. ^_^

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