Ooh.. a very good poem... interesting.. love the way you start...the description is very detailed..nicely done there ^^
My eyelashes pull back to reveal
the dark depths of my nervousness.
That thought twirls around the corner of my
mind.
My stomach falls apart, my palms become damp with
hesitation and uncertainty, I double over clutching
my insides.
I'm not sure who anyone is anymore,
no one really looks familiar and welcoming,
then there is you.
I can feel your breath against my ear,
even the soft brush of your lips feels real.
I don't lift my hand to feel for your hair,
because I know you're not there.
Just remember, it's only a little while longer,
and I know it's for the best, but sometimes it's harder
than what I had guessed.
I remember the way you looked at my
that day,
it's been burned in my brain that I wasn't sure
what to say.
Honey, we'll make it, just wait and see,
we'll be together, you and me.
Dear Dinah...
Ooh.. a very good poem... interesting.. love the way you start...the description is very detailed..nicely done there ^^
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Dear Dinah...
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