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Old Feb 14, 2008, 09:21 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Bless This Soul

If you wish to incite my anger
Take away from me a part of my soul
These words are me livelyhood
Each taking me to a world all my own

If you wish to be murdered
Incite my anger, when its already blazing
Oh bless that poor soul in that day

The more passionate I feel
The more dangerous I become
No inhibitions, nothing will hold back my fury
Be cautious of how you tread when I am ready to explode

Patient and quiet id what you see
Burning desire and rage is what I feel
Your reality means nothing to me
Only what I feel is important, your reality is not worth the air you breathe

For one day you will perish by ny hand
In that day I will steal the soul from your body
And continue living on
So hurry and die
For I want to begin life a new


As usual if you find any errors let me know.
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Old Feb 15, 2008, 04:11 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Bless This Soul

Very good as always, I didn't see no problems in it when i was reading it. I loved the wording in it and the emotion that was shown .Love the picture with it as well
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Old Feb 16, 2008, 06:14 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Bless This Soul

That is very good.
I love makeing poems.
This was beautiful
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