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Reply With QuoteOh, I started to figure it out the poem at the middle to end oart. It's not bad actually, it's just like your sig
I don't know how bad it is @_@ Hope you can comment about it.
Blinded
Pretty face, a picture of your dreams
Empty case, to hold nothing within
Radiant skin, catching your wandering eye
Deadly means, motives that makes you cry
Flowing hair, running through the breeze
Jealous pair, vengeance that never cease
Floating above, you think you’re in love
Her perfection, something I need not mention
Pull you in, a victim caught in her fin
Lovely grace, you go for the chase
Eyes filled with lust, under a spell she cast
A pawn in the game, to her it’s all the same
Blinded fool, you were just a simple tool
Turn back now, before you never know how…
Oh, I started to figure it out the poem at the middle to end oart. It's not bad actually, it's just like your sig
I really liked this one! I like the fact that the lines are quite short and grouped it too, it made it alot easier to read and understand... And the though... I just love the thing you're saying in this poem... And the last lines... wonderful, I liked the fact that the reason why the title is "Blinded" is explained in the end... it made it all more intense, I enjoyed reading this very much!
Ooh.. i like this onebrilliantly made... like it very much
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I love it it had a bouncy flow to it yet it was short ^_^
awww. that's a sad poem... i like it though... it kind of remindes me of people I used to know... and some I still know...
very nice one ^^ but it has a certain something I cant put my finger on it... anyway its very good
nice poem it was kinda sweet and made me think you were talking about a mermaid when you mentioned the fin.
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