Thread: Blood

@.@ oh my... that's um.. kinda scary.^^ i love it!! Brings pictures into your head of what it look like... You can feel what sort of emotions the person had... Terrific wording when your able to do that. I want to see more of your work and keep it up^^

Wow!!!!! This is great *grins* makes me think of sweet revenge... and like what I see in my mind, though of course I'd never kill anyone, it's just nice to put yourself in place of a murderer or smth... I think I might write a story about this one...

A very nice work... The descriptions are very good, really created the scene in my mind, the red blood all around... it's just like wow... dunno... I reallt like this!

WHOA! Chan, this is kinda creepy. o_O
I like it! It's very descriptive and imaginative. It's not everyday you get to read a poem like this and think to yourself, "Wow! And I know this person??" I'm joking. LOL

Good job! I hope to read more of this calibur. ^_^

Really? Wow... I am glad you liked it and it tickles me that you think that about it. Creepy really? I didn't think it was that well written but I really enjoyed it anyway.

I really love that so many of you saw this this way. It's fantastic! Laura, thanks so much, I'm glad you appriciate this so much. I was in one of those vengeful moods os your not far from right. If you write the story be sure to let me know so I can read it!