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Jul 31, 2007, 02:51 AM
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 Angelic  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms
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 Credits: 49,375 | Blood for Blood I just am really mad at something, don't think anyone will guess what... Anyways, it's not that important... I hope you like this poem... I just want to scream: „GO TO HELL You beast!!!”- I just want to give up And never come back again... Oh but I won’t fall down and cry- I’ll never give up on this. I’ll haunt you forever more! I’ll follow your trace ‘till hell! And there once will come a time When I beat you to the ground. The nice way won’t do no more- You want to see my blood. Blood for blood is what you get I will bleed but you will fall. I’ll haunt you forevermore Until it’s all but mine… |
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Jul 31, 2007, 05:59 AM
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Credits: 425 | Re: Blood for Blood sounds like ur mad at maybe a boyfriend love the poem though i read your work before i read anyone elses. eventhough your mad your work is still great. thanks for the poem
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Jul 31, 2007, 06:07 AM
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Credits: 49,375 | Re: Blood for Blood Yes I am mad... but it's nothing about a boyfriend- I usually talk things out and everything is either fine again or... we break up ^^ lol I'm mad at something else... I'm glad you like this poem ^^ and I feel honoured to hear that you read my work first... |
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Jul 31, 2007, 08:40 AM
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 Pro Utilitate Hominum  Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: You know that feeling, like you're being watched...
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Credits: 28,584 | Re: Blood for Blood Looks like somebody peed you off big time!! Have you considered decaf?  Nice work though. Definitely talent there. Angry talent, but talent never the less.
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Jul 31, 2007, 08:57 AM
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Credits: 49,375 | Re: Blood for Blood Actually I wasn't really that mad when writing this one... I just read over one that I wrote yesterday... why that seems too much even for me! But I'm glad you all find this poem so full of anger... it means a lot to me... thank you for your comments ^^ |
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Jul 31, 2007, 10:45 AM
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Credits: 616 | Re: Blood for Blood Its a wonderful poem but its seems like you were frustrated or in a fight with someone but I dk but for me it relates for I have time like this and I am full of anger and I want to do something but not to kill someone but wonderful job keep up with the good work!! 
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Jul 31, 2007, 10:58 AM
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Credits: 49,375 | Re: Blood for Blood Well... yea... it's just what it is- I'm n a fight with somebody in something.... I'm not gonna kill anyone ofcourse ^^ I just put some other feelings to make it... have more action in it... ^^ Thank You!!! I' m glad you like this and can relate to it! ^^ |
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Jul 31, 2007, 11:13 AM
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Credits: 1,530 | Re: Blood for Blood Wow!!! girl that intence you get straight across and blunt i like it. i can picture everything u said fight clearly y only your blood though. |
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Credits: 49,375 | Re: Blood for Blood Quote:
LOL! ^^ Actually I have no idea... oh no... I do... I read a book "Wormwood" by G.P. Taylor and he wrote about an archangel. And well... his blood was his most deathfull weapon- because his blood was like an acid for human body... I guess I've put that thought here too ^^ Anyways thank You for this comment!!!! ^^ I'm really glad you like this poem and find it getting "straight across and blunt" and the fact that you can imagine everythin seems just blissfull for me!!!!!!! | |
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Jul 31, 2007, 02:33 PM
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| Otaku  | Re: Blood for Blood really I love it ... I see some fighting there mabye with your boyfriend or another else .. by the way I love it ...show the girls can be strong and never give up easly ...so keep it up Lasura..^^
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