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    Blood for Blood

    I just am really mad at something, don't think anyone will guess what...
    Anyways, it's not that important... I hope you like this poem...

    I just want to scream:
    „GO TO HELL You beast!!!”-
    I just want to give up
    And never come back again...

    Oh but I won’t fall down and cry-
    I’ll never give up on this.
    I’ll haunt you forever more!
    I’ll follow your trace ‘till hell!

    And there once will come a time
    When I beat you to the ground.
    The nice way won’t do no more-
    You want to see my blood.

    Blood for blood is what you get
    I will bleed but you will fall.
    I’ll haunt you forevermore
    Until it’s all but mine…

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Blood for Blood

    sounds like ur mad at maybe a boyfriend love the poem though i read your work before i read anyone elses. eventhough your mad your work is still great. thanks for the poem

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    Re: Blood for Blood

    Yes I am mad... but it's nothing about a boyfriend- I usually talk things out and everything is either fine again or... we break up ^^ lol
    I'm mad at something else...

    I'm glad you like this poem ^^ and I feel honoured to hear that you read my work first...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Blood for Blood

    i wouldve guessed a boyfriend also but its really good

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    Re: Blood for Blood

    Looks like somebody peed you off big time!! Have you considered decaf?

    Nice work though. Definitely talent there. Angry talent, but talent never the less.

    The Madman previously known as Daniel219

    Wish I could get on here more often. *Sigh* The down side to night shift...

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    Re: Blood for Blood

    Actually I wasn't really that mad when writing this one... I just read over one that I wrote yesterday... why that seems too much even for me!

    But I'm glad you all find this poem so full of anger... it means a lot to me... thank you for your comments ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Blood for Blood

    Its a wonderful poem but its seems like you were frustrated or in a fight with someone but I dk but for me it relates for I have time like this and I am full of anger and I want to do something but not to kill someone but wonderful job keep up with the good work!!

    Made by mi amigo Mveli2

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    Re: Blood for Blood

    Well... yea... it's just what it is- I'm n a fight with somebody in something.... I'm not gonna kill anyone ofcourse ^^ I just put some other feelings to make it... have more action in it... ^^

    Thank You!!! I' m glad you like this and can relate to it! ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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