Blood Lust Part 6
The wind blows the leaves out side as
the branch taps the stained window as
his eye's open , the licking of his lips
and the dead darkness of his glinting eye
opening means another night of lust.
The creaking stair case ,a lid left
open on his place of rest he hunger
is more ferocious than ever , he opens
a door to take in the night air as the
night welcomes him.
Hello!! he hears to the side as he
see's a man standing there looking to him
the man then walks over to him with a smile
saying *i can save you* then fades away
He stand there with a bit of a laugh
and shrugs it off saying *too late for that*
as he walks into the night air for another
night of full filling his lust , a window opened
and a woman humming , the fresh scent of
perfume and freshly washed skin .
He scales the building to her window to see
her with a towel wrapped around her combing her hair
looking to a picture that must be her significant other
he thinks back on his lost love and he smiles.
he jump through the window landing to his one knee
and look to her as she gasps in terror to afraid to scream
he looks to her as she trembles and says * what you love in life
and what you seek in pleasure i can fulfill in moments kiss.
as he approaches her she back to the bed as she falls back,
crawling backwards towards the head board of the bed , he
smiles gently and jump to the bed so easily and hold her to the head
board as the coldness of his lips touches hers and he whispers .
Before he does she turns her head away leaving her neck open
unintentionally he smile and take a finger lift her face back to his
and then whispers coldly to her lip as his lips are so close to hers
*i can smell your fear and i hear your heart pounding so much*.
she sighs out no!! please i have much to live for , he turns
her head and leans to her ear and speaks softly with cold
breath you have much to die for as well seeing you have
what i need , he lips part as his fangs glide across her
He reaches her jugular as his teeth sink into her
and he drink away her life tasting that sweet crimson
that he lusts for so much she gasps out slowly as her
eyes go cold and then she is gone.
He drops her to the bed as he licks his lips
saying * who needs saving ? * and he laughs
he leaves as the door is broken down someone
had informed them of where he was but they
were to late.
ok this is part 6 of my poem/story of the crimson lust
this one was abit more graphic but i did hold back a bit
this one was almost to hard to write with so many
different directions i could have went. comments
and suggestions are welcomed/
Re: Blood Lust Part 6
woa... this is nice.... @.@ i love the descriptions...long and yet still enjoyable.. keep up the good work man... ^^
sheesh...towel eh.. i tot there was gonna be rape.. *punches palm of dissapointment*
Re: Blood Lust Part 6
I have no words to describe this beautful peace of art!!!!!
You deserve a loud applause