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    Blood Lust Part 6

    The wind blows the leaves out side as
    the branch taps the stained window as
    his eye's open , the licking of his lips
    and the dead darkness of his glinting eye
    opening means another night of lust.

    The creaking stair case ,a lid left
    open on his place of rest he hunger
    is more ferocious than ever , he opens
    a door to take in the night air as the
    night welcomes him.

    Hello!! he hears to the side as he
    see's a man standing there looking to him
    the man then walks over to him with a smile
    saying *i can save you* then fades away
    into nothing.

    He stand there with a bit of a laugh
    and shrugs it off saying *too late for that*
    as he walks into the night air for another
    night of full filling his lust , a window opened
    and a woman humming , the fresh scent of
    perfume and freshly washed skin .

    He scales the building to her window to see
    her with a towel wrapped around her combing her hair
    looking to a picture that must be her significant other
    he thinks back on his lost love and he smiles.

    he jump through the window landing to his one knee
    and look to her as she gasps in terror to afraid to scream
    he looks to her as she trembles and says * what you love in life
    and what you seek in pleasure i can fulfill in moments kiss.

    as he approaches her she back to the bed as she falls back,
    crawling backwards towards the head board of the bed , he
    smiles gently and jump to the bed so easily and hold her to the head
    board as the coldness of his lips touches hers and he whispers .

    Before he does she turns her head away leaving her neck open
    unintentionally he smile and take a finger lift her face back to his
    and then whispers coldly to her lip as his lips are so close to hers
    *i can smell your fear and i hear your heart pounding so much*.

    she sighs out no!! please i have much to live for , he turns
    her head and leans to her ear and speaks softly with cold
    breath you have much to die for as well seeing you have
    what i need , he lips part as his fangs glide across her

    He reaches her jugular as his teeth sink into her
    and he drink away her life tasting that sweet crimson
    that he lusts for so much she gasps out slowly as her
    eyes go cold and then she is gone.

    He drops her to the bed as he licks his lips
    saying * who needs saving ? * and he laughs
    he leaves as the door is broken down someone
    had informed them of where he was but they
    were to late.
    ok this is part 6 of my poem/story of the crimson lust
    this one was abit more graphic but i did hold back a bit
    this one was almost to hard to write with so many
    different directions i could have went. comments
    and suggestions are welcomed/
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Blood Lust Part 6

    woa... this is nice.... @.@ i love the descriptions...long and yet still enjoyable.. keep up the good work man... ^^

    sheesh...towel eh.. i tot there was gonna be rape.. *punches palm of dissapointment*

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    I have no words to describe this beautful peace of art!!!!!
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