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| King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,320 | Blood Lust Part 6 The wind blows the leaves out side as the branch taps the stained window as his eye's open , the licking of his lips and the dead darkness of his glinting eye opening means another night of lust. The creaking stair case ,a lid left open on his place of rest he hunger is more ferocious than ever , he opens a door to take in the night air as the night welcomes him. Hello!! he hears to the side as he see's a man standing there looking to him the man then walks over to him with a smile saying *i can save you* then fades away into nothing. He stand there with a bit of a laugh and shrugs it off saying *too late for that* as he walks into the night air for another night of full filling his lust , a window opened and a woman humming , the fresh scent of perfume and freshly washed skin . He scales the building to her window to see her with a towel wrapped around her combing her hair looking to a picture that must be her significant other he thinks back on his lost love and he smiles. he jump through the window landing to his one knee and look to her as she gasps in terror to afraid to scream he looks to her as she trembles and says * what you love in life and what you seek in pleasure i can fulfill in moments kiss. as he approaches her she back to the bed as she falls back, crawling backwards towards the head board of the bed , he smiles gently and jump to the bed so easily and hold her to the head board as the coldness of his lips touches hers and he whispers . Before he does she turns her head away leaving her neck open unintentionally he smile and take a finger lift her face back to his and then whispers coldly to her lip as his lips are so close to hers *i can smell your fear and i hear your heart pounding so much*. she sighs out no!! please i have much to live for , he turns her head and leans to her ear and speaks softly with cold breath you have much to die for as well seeing you have what i need , he lips part as his fangs glide across her skin. He reaches her jugular as his teeth sink into her and he drink away her life tasting that sweet crimson that he lusts for so much she gasps out slowly as her eyes go cold and then she is gone. He drops her to the bed as he licks his lips saying * who needs saving ? * and he laughs he leaves as the door is broken down someone had informed them of where he was but they were to late. ________________________________________________ ok this is part 6 of my poem/story of the crimson lust this one was abit more graphic but i did hold back a bit this one was almost to hard to write with so many different directions i could have went. comments and suggestions are welcomed/ |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 59,148 | Re: Blood Lust Part 6 woa... this is nice.... @.@ i love the descriptions...long and yet still enjoyable.. keep up the good work man... ^^ sheesh...towel eh.. i tot there was gonna be rape.. *punches palm of dissapointment* |
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![]() Credits: 31,449 | Re: Blood Lust Part 6 OMG!!!!! I have no words to describe this beautful peace of art!!!!! You deserve a loud applause
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