Blood is my Bliss

secret lover · May 17, 2007, 12:28 PM

Blood is my bliss my treasure so pure.
Blood is my bliss like the roses in my
garden.Blood is my bliss like the desire
of death.Blood is my bliss like the moon everynight.
Blood is my bliss like an enjoyment for peace.
Blood is my bliss and so it will stay.

KuwiRules145 · May 17, 2007, 09:22 PM

Isn't this a bit crazy hearing this just kidding. Nice poem! Isn't this poem called repeat a word or something like that. Oh well I love it since you just keep repeating this line and it just goes with it. Hope to see more!

PocketLint · May 18, 2007, 06:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by secret lover

Blood is my bliss my treasure so pure.
Blood is my bliss like the roses in my
garden.Blood is my bliss like the desire
of death.Blood is my bliss like the moon everynight.
Blood is my bliss like an enjoyment for peace.
Blood is my bliss and so it will stay.

You say "blood is my bliss" alot. i thougt it would sound better with defferent adjectives to describe what blood is to you. and how you have the last part of the sentence start a line at times, seems oddly structured.

there is much feeling and hart in your work tho. keep writing.

secret lover · May 18, 2007, 10:44 PM

"Truth"
You told me the truth I thank you.
You must hate me for saying this.
Handle this flow handle my flow.
My poems are my heart and soul.
Blood is my rose blood is my honor.
And now that I'm done my truth is to.

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secret lover Newbie Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: somewhere in the darkness of Hell Posts: 12 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 398	Blood is my Bliss Blood is my bliss my treasure so pure. Blood is my bliss like the roses in my garden.Blood is my bliss like the desire of death.Blood is my bliss like the moon everynight. Blood is my bliss like an enjoyment for peace. Blood is my bliss and so it will stay. __________________ Your soul is now mine...
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May 17, 2007, 09:22 PM	#2 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: Blood is my Bliss Isn't this a bit crazy hearing this just kidding. Nice poem! Isn't this poem called repeat a word or something like that. Oh well I love it since you just keep repeating this line and it just goes with it. Hope to see more! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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secret lover Newbie Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: somewhere in the darkness of Hell Posts: 12 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 398	Re: Blood is my Bliss "Truth" You told me the truth I thank you. You must hate me for saying this. Handle this flow handle my flow. My poems are my heart and soul. Blood is my rose blood is my honor. And now that I'm done my truth is to. __________________ Your soul is now mine...
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