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    Blood is my Bliss

    Blood is my bliss my treasure so pure.
    Blood is my bliss like the roses in my
    garden.Blood is my bliss like the desire
    of death.Blood is my bliss like the moon everynight.
    Blood is my bliss like an enjoyment for peace.
    Blood is my bliss and so it will stay.
    Your soul is now mine...

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    Re: Blood is my Bliss

    Isn't this a bit crazy hearing this just kidding. Nice poem! Isn't this poem called repeat a word or something like that. Oh well I love it since you just keep repeating this line and it just goes with it. Hope to see more!
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    Re: Blood is my Bliss

    Quote Originally Posted by secret lover View Post
    Blood is my bliss my treasure so pure.
    Blood is my bliss like the roses in my
    garden.Blood is my bliss like the desire
    of death.Blood is my bliss like the moon everynight.
    Blood is my bliss like an enjoyment for peace.
    Blood is my bliss and so it will stay.
    You say "blood is my bliss" alot. i thougt it would sound better with defferent adjectives to describe what blood is to you. and how you have the last part of the sentence start a line at times, seems oddly structured.

    there is much feeling and hart in your work tho. keep writing.

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    Re: Blood is my Bliss

    "Truth"
    You told me the truth I thank you.
    You must hate me for saying this.
    Handle this flow handle my flow.
    My poems are my heart and soul.
    Blood is my rose blood is my honor.
    And now that I'm done my truth is to.
    Your soul is now mine...

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