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    Blood on my sword:

    As I stand here over my victims I pray,
    Not for forgiveness,
    Not for myself,
    Not even for my family,
    But for the fouls and helpless souls I have slain,
    There stupidity has stained my sword red with envy, blood, and rage,
    These idiots’s waste there lives so meaninglessly,
    They fought for all the wrong reasons,
    I have not killed them,
    I have saved them from there ultimate fate by,
    Suffering it for myself,
    Such a waste of flesh,
    They have no use for this life anymore,
    I will suffer this pain for them,
    They must find there own path now,
    I hope they chose the right one.
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    Re: " Blood on My Sword " A tribute to the vengeful

    Nice dark/emo/goth poem man, keep it up.

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    Re: " Blood on My Sword " A tribute to the vengeful

    I do the best that I can with what I have

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    Re: " Blood on My Sword " A tribute to the vengeful

    nice dark one here. I can imagine the battlefield and everyone dead around u. Nice work, keep it up.

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    Re: " Blood on My Sword " A tribute to the vengeful

    Great poem....and it rings true....

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    Re: " Blood on My Sword " A tribute to the vengeful

    Once agian thnx for the support my fellow AO users.

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    Re: " Blood on My Sword " A tribute to the vengeful

    As I said last night ... very deep and dark. Have you been watching "Hellraiser"? and "Waste of felshe" Ah! How many times have I used that one.

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    Re: " Blood on My Sword " A tribute to the vengeful

    Nice work dude keep it up ^_^

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